I Cultivate the Violet Palace Golden Elixir Path on Earth

Currently, there are over 40 chapters. The protagonist grows up in a Xuanjian-style worldview, reaching the peak of the Zifu realm, and then dies and ends up on Earth. Those who have read Xuanjian should know what kind of world it is. It can only be described as a shallow place with many turtles. Ninety-nine percent of the opportunities that appear in front of you are arranged by others.

Let me guess, the elements of this book include: thugs, showing off and getting slapped in the face, a vicious ex-girlfriend, high school, students, academy setting, a policewoman, the local underworld, and a reclusive family.

Chapters four and five contain too much detail about Jiang Songjing, with too much setup. Even Ji Yueren wouldn't dare to spend so much ink depicting a character at the beginning, yet you, author, dare to defy the world!

This kind of story doesn't last long; I've read several on Qidian (a Chinese online literature platform), and they were all abandoned.

The spiritual revival was supposed to be a minor climax, but it ended up being written as high school students being pretentious and affected. (That's all.)

You want to write a group portrait? Can you write it clearly? I don't have that skill.

In fact, the Fruit-based cultivation system is a very average, even weak, system in the realm of fantasy works. This is because the suppressive power of Fruit-based cultivation is only effective within the system itself. Essentially, it is the same as the concept of gods and divine positions in Western fantasy from over a decade ago. Against beings outside the system, it still relies on the power of scale to suppress them.

The first few chapters were alright, but then all sorts of superlatives suddenly appeared, and it immediately dragged the book down. The book lacks any sense of grandeur in terms of plot and characters, the supporting characters are poorly chosen, and the constant shifts to how things will turn out years later are toxic; spoiling the future makes it completely unreadable.

The writing is too off-topic. It's about high school students fighting over a cultivation technique, all becoming Dao Ancestors during a spiritual revival—does this even have the concept of spiritual roots? And then there's this whole test and then the transfer of power? It's ridiculous, so petty and small-minded.

There's a sense of helplessness, like drinking yogurt only to find out it was expired milk. Readers want well-developed characters, not characters who seem to have dual personalities like you have. The plot twists in the story are indeed interesting, but if you're going to keep making twists and turns, does your family own any shares in Zhuanzhuan? It's all just going around in circles.