I Cultivate the Violet Palace Golden Elixir Path on Earth

At present, there are more than 40 chapters. The protagonist grew up in a Xuanjianliu world view, reached the highest rank in the Zifu realm, and then died on earth. Those who have seen Xuanjian should know what kind of world view this is. It can only be said that he is a notorious shallow fool. Ninety-nine percent of the opportunities that appear in front of him are arranged by others. In the end, he will be eaten by others as elixirs or used for other things. And what about the protagonist? In summary, the current behavior is that the immortal emperors in the classical urban immortality literature are reborn into the urban world. Then he added spiritual energy recovery and some mysterious settings. Judging from the plot in the school, the author is also good at writing show-offs, but the plot arrangement is a mess💩 Why does an opportunity appear in a school and then a few people start talking nonsense and start fighting for it? What kind of fateful arrangement? The great hand of God? I drew several pictures to highlight the characters' personalities, which were both stinky and lengthy. No? Who cares about the characters of your supporting characters? There is also the character design of the protagonist. He is obviously a character like Xuan Jian who grew up with a world view of people. As a result, the writing has the flavor of a classical fairy tale. This can be seen from the first dozen chapters. What about the Xuanjianliu that I am missing, the upper cultivator suppressing the lower cultivator? Steal Tianmingzi's opportunity and use Tianmingzi to deliberately dig holes for Tianmingzi to prevent others from catching up? To summarize This is a book that is criticized for being a misunderstanding of Xuanjian, but in fact it is a book about the urban dragon king + the rebirth of the immortal emperor + the revival of spiritual energy + inferior behind-the-scenes stories. The author's writing is good, and he is obviously good at writing pretentiously, but the plot is sparse and the dialogue between the characters is smelly and long, and several supporting characters are particularly written by young people. In the early stage, the author was obviously eager to throw out his own world view setting, and gave a very long explanation of several Dao Fruits. However, there is no need to rush to throw this stuff out slowly or all at once. I can only think that it is in the water. But if you are familiar with the author's brainwave, you will think it's okay. After all, the writing style is there. I was right at first, but then it stopped. I really couldn't stand the xx plot of the Urban Dragon King.

Let me guess, the elements of this book are: gangsters, pretenders, vicious ex-girlfriends, high school, students, college stream, police beauty, local underworld, reclusive family

Chapter 4 and Chapter 5: The chapter about Jiang Songjing is too long and has too much foreshadowing Not even Ji Yue people dared to spend so much time describing a character at the beginning. How dare you, the author, risk the disapproval of the world!

The writing on this subject is not very long. I have read several of them from Qidian, and they all looked like eunuchs.

The revival of spiritual energy was originally a small climax, but it turned out to be a high school student's pretense. Finished

I want to write a group portrait, can you write it clearly? Not that level

In fact, the system of cultivating immortals in the realm of fantasy works is actually a very average or even weak system, because the suppressive power of cultivating immortals in the realm of realms can only be applied within the system. It is essentially the same thing as the godhood and status in Western Fantasy more than ten years ago. Existences outside the system still need to be suppressed by magnitude.

The first few chapters were okay, but all kinds of allusions suddenly appeared, and I was hooked at once. Xuan Jian's book has no plot characters at all, and the supporting roles are too big, and it is always written about what will happen to this person after many years. It is too poisonous, and it spoils the future of Mao.

The writing is too biased. It writes about some high school students competing with each other for an article on how to cultivate immortality. They all became Taoist ancestors and their spiritual energy was revived. Do you have any opinions on spiritual roots? What kind of test should I take and then wear it? I'm so speechless and the writing is so petty.

There is a feeling of powerlessness like after drinking yogurt and finding out that it is expired milk. Readers want fleshed-out characters, not dual personalities like yours. The twist in the story is indeed interesting, but you turn it for the sake of the twist. Does your family have shares in Zhuanzhuan? Turning around. If you don't have that ability, don't always think about writing group portraits. You really think you are the next Ji Yue person. The subject matter is good, but you missed the point. Why did you forget the title of your book? Don't keep playing with decentralization. I suggest you not be a eunuch, because although few people will give it good reviews, you will definitely gain a lot from bad reviews. As for whether having too many bad reviews is good or bad, it depends on what you think.