I Am Cultivating the Golden Elixir Path of Zifu on Earth

I haven't looked at the starting point for a year. Is this the level of Sanjiang? ? ? I thought I clicked on tomatoes 🤔

The foreshadowing of Jiang Songjing's introduction is actually quite good, it cuts into the texture and is quite natural. But as for the swordsmanship mentioned by the author, and the fact that the third daughter from Jiang Songjing's biological father's family is very talented, there may be something to be done in the future. This is not to say that writing about women is a poisonous point, nor is it to say that writing about women will lead to misunderstandings. But from the perspective of shaping, the first impression is indeed not very pleasing, and certainly not disgusting. The entry is unnatural, and it's hard for me to imagine what kind of development will be used to make readers fall in love with this character. At the same time, it will be very interesting to write about the setting of the five virtues, as well as the Eastern Wood Way, and then the Western Gold. I think it will be very interesting, and I am still looking forward to it. After reading this article, I may have mixed reviews, so I am just complaining personally.

At present, there are more than 40 chapters. The protagonist grew up in a Xuanjianliu world view, reached the highest rank in the Zifu realm, and then died on earth. Those who have seen Xuanjian should know what kind of world view this is. It can only be said that he is a notorious shallow fool. Ninety-nine percent of the opportunities that appear in front of him are arranged by others. In the end, he will be eaten by others as elixirs or used for other things. And what about the protagonist? In summary, the current behavior is that the immortal emperors in the classical urban immortality literature are reborn into the urban world. Then he added spiritual energy recovery and some mysterious settings. Judging from the plot in the school, the author is also good at writing show-offs, but the plot arrangement is a mess💩 Why does an opportunity appear in a school and then a few people start talking nonsense and start fighting for it? What kind of fateful arrangement? The great hand of God? I drew several pictures to highlight the characters' personalities, which were both stinky and lengthy. No? Who cares about the characters of your supporting characters? There is also the character design of the protagonist. He is obviously a character like Xuan Jian who grew up with a world view of people. As a result, the writing has the flavor of a classical fairy tale. This can be seen from the first dozen chapters. What about the Xuanjianliu that I am missing, the upper cultivator suppressing the lower cultivator? Steal Tianmingzi's opportunity and use Tianmingzi to deliberately dig holes for Tianmingzi to prevent others from catching up? To summarize This is a book that is criticized for being a misunderstanding of Xuanjian, but in fact it is a book about the urban dragon king + the rebirth of the immortal emperor + the revival of spiritual energy + inferior behind-the-scenes stories. The author's writing is good, and he is obviously good at writing pretentiously, but the plot is sparse and the dialogue between the characters is smelly and long, and several supporting characters are particularly written by young people. In the early stage, the author was obviously eager to throw out his own world view setting, and gave a very long explanation of several Dao Fruits. However, there is no need to rush to throw this stuff out slowly or all at once. I can only think that it is in the water. But if you are familiar with the author's brainwave, you will think it's okay. After all, the writing style is there. I was right at first, but then it stopped. I really couldn't stand the xx plot of the Urban Dragon King.

Let me guess, the elements of this book are: gangsters, pretenders, vicious ex-girlfriends, high school, students, college stream, police beauty, local underworld, reclusive family

Chapter 4 and Chapter 5: The chapter about Jiang Songjing is too long and has too much foreshadowing Not even Ji Yue people dared to spend so much time describing a character at the beginning. How dare you, the author, risk the disapproval of the world!

The writing on this subject is not very long. I have read several of them from Qidian, and they all looked like eunuchs.

The revival of spiritual energy was originally a small climax, but it turned out to be a high school student's pretense. Finished

I want to write a group portrait, can you write it clearly? Not that level

In fact, the system of cultivating immortals in the realm of fantasy works is actually a very average or even weak system, because the suppressive power of cultivating immortals in the realm of realms can only be applied within the system. It is essentially the same thing as the godhood and status in Western Fantasy more than ten years ago. Existences outside the system still need to be suppressed by magnitude.

The first few chapters were okay, but all kinds of allusions suddenly appeared, and I was hooked at once. Xuan Jian's book has no plot characters at all, and the supporting roles are too big, and it is always written about what will happen to this person after many years. It is too poisonous, and it spoils the future of Mao.

The writing is too biased. It writes about some high school students competing with each other for an article on how to cultivate immortality. They all became Taoist ancestors and their spiritual energy was revived. Do you have any opinions on spiritual roots? What kind of test should I take and then wear it? I'm so speechless and the writing is so petty.

There is a feeling of powerlessness like after drinking yogurt and finding out that it is expired milk. Readers want fleshed-out characters, not dual personalities like yours. The twist in the story is indeed interesting, but you turn it for the sake of the twist. Does your family have shares in Zhuanzhuan? Turning around. If you don't have that ability, don't always think about writing group portraits. You really think you are the next Ji Yue person. The subject matter is good, but you missed the point. Why did you forget the title of your book? Don't keep playing with decentralization. I suggest you not be a eunuch, because although few people will give it good reviews, you will definitely gain a lot from bad reviews. As for whether having too many bad reviews is good or bad, it depends on what you think.

It's so classic, especially when describing female characters, it feels like an urban novel from ten years ago.

Returning human beings three calamities, paralysis, and poisonous death. This is not an alien demon, this is an alien old man. What was great in the last century now seems to be full of flaws.

Do you have a problem with dissatisfied readers? Do you deliberately write this kind of novel to take revenge on readers? How can it be disgusting for others to write?

The world view setting is okay, and the writing is good, but at present, the plot is too boring, and one picture is taken every day. I recently took a leave of absence, maybe two months, I guess you will be a eunuch in two months

But the specific plot is written like a fake. The brothers and sisters in the scene where Jiang recognizes his relatives are all fake, including the positive sister, who is completely the stereotype of a normal person who is a top student. When he sees the protagonist, he doesn't know what he is doing. He is also a kendo seed. He is not as lovable as the two flat villains. At least I know what the villain is doing.       ，，，，，，， The two high school villains would kill people casually as soon as they entered the back room. They transitioned smoothly to the underworld and cultivated immortality without any mental preparation. The author's character writing was too deliberate. I guess he first thought about the plot, and then created the characters to fit the plot. They all had no self-will and were just to fit the plot. I already have a premonition that there will be a lot of OOC scenes with inconsistent characters in the future.       ，，，

The writing power cannot support such a lofty intention. The protagonist's behavior is full of confrontation, which is too low-level.

Is it written crookedly? In recent chapters, there are a lot of rhetoric and terminology + students fighting each other. This feels too far away from Daozu. One is too high and the other is too low. One is that in high school, one's character was undecided and the three views were not stable. The other is that killing each other would be outrageous. There are not many people in the country who dare to kill people in high school, but they all got together to form a team 🤐

I read your novel. I thought it was those little black guys who were slandering you. But it turned out that I really didn't accuse you. I still have some opinions on the first 30 chapters. As of the high school copy, my toes were about to pop out of the three bedrooms and one living room. Although it was later said to be a supernatural seduce, the character dialogue made me feel like I had seen those old novels... I finally skipped the high school copy and started to introduce the cultivation system of the fake sky. Why can't I do it step by step and throw out a bunch of them? The plot is really too overwhelming. In one word, it is the introduction system in the first 30 chapters. The first plot copy is too confusing. I think it has the flavor of Xuanjian. It can be regarded as a little bit.

The initial order should be more than 800, and there is a high probability that I won't be able to write it down.

I asked why it is so familiar. This book is a variant of Tokyo Behind the Scenes. I kept writing about those characters.

Zifu Jindan said, I feel that the upper limit is so low. To put it bluntly, isn't this similar to the magic of absorbing incense? And it's not as good as others. The essence is something like mastering a certain rule and then refining it later. The so-called Taoist is limited by the world, and some of them are very unreasonable. For example, why can a lot of genius treasures be born after death? Energy conservation is eaten, and the food is so rough. And the most ridiculous thing is that the upgrade is actually announced to the world. What the hell?

Are you interested in the readers we are following?

Too much nonsense, nothing written in three chapters

There is some culture, but not much. Xuanjian and Chusheng's statuses have their origins. You are doing this incomprehensibly and have no meaning.

Actually it's okay, at least it's not an assembly line novice.

I knew I was going to die, but now there's no threshold for promoting books from Qidian?

Is the author still there? Is he still writing?