Historical Paradise: Starting from Wanli Aiding Korea

I came across your book from the great master's chapter recommendation. I just finished reading Chapter 23, and I can write it well. After reading Infinite Streaming for many years, I now cherish this kind of book even more, which did not start as a fan. I know that the original copy is extremely difficult, and it is also the most difficult test for the author. Your book showed me your sincerity, not to borrow other people's world to get started, but to seriously build your own world. Of course, the early data will definitely be slow to come up, but this is the right path. I hope you can keep writing, and I hope there will be more authors like you in the future.

I personally like this book very much. It hits a few points that I care about right from the beginning. The first is that the protagonist is reliable. This is really important. Many novels nowadays are most afraid that the protagonist is either too stupid or too arrogant, but the protagonist in this book is obviously not. He observes the environment, judges the situation, and takes action at a relatively online time, so readers will not be anxious while reading. The second is the strong advancement of the story. From entering the paradise, to entering the Ming Dynasty, to recruiting and establishing power, the process is one after another, and there is no wasted drama. Thirdly, the historical flavor is very well done, especially the parts about the frontier army, firearms, recruitment, and military discipline. It can be seen that the author did not just check Baidu and start writing by hand, but read the book. Historical writing is most afraid of having a nameless background, and as a result, it ends up being the same old empty book, but at least the beginning of this book is not like that. So my evaluation is: the subject matter is innovative, the writing has pictures, and the characters have supporting points. It is a type that can make people want to read more after reading a few chapters. Also, I know you are not a newbie. Have you considered writing a historical article specifically? It's a pity that such good writing is written in the heavens.

After reading it, I found that it is a completely original book, the plot is smooth and tense, and the characters are logically online. It's not a mindless crushing game. It has intelligence and cooperation. The battle is exciting. Thumbs up. Being willing to spend time writing characters is also rare. There are also problems. The settings can be more natural and the information does not need to be too full. Of course, these are details and do not affect the overall situation. I personally like your way of writing, a typical long-term setting. The three views are very upright and there is a sense of chivalry. This should be maintained. Original work will definitely suffer in the early stage. Fans can take advantage of it, but you cannot. There are many things, you have to spread them slowly. If you have the strength, your results will come later. You can easily write 3 million words using this framework. Send you a message. A good book is not afraid of being slow, but it is afraid of being lost halfway.

To be honest, recruiting soldiers cannot recruit refugees. Firstly, they lack physical strength. Secondly, their origins are unknown. Thirdly, they are illiterate and cannot teach military discipline and military formations. Even civilians are embarrassed.

I haven't watched it yet, but I know it's clear that the old Zhu family's rebellion is against them. The gentry group along the coast was killed, the bandits who collaborated with the enemy on all sides were killed, the red-haired barbarian missionaries were killed, and the roots of the old Zhu family were dug into their graves, and the family of Lao Zhu was killed all over the world. Kill these in turn, and then open up the people's wisdom. At least it can prevent the annihilation of civilization.

I felt a little aggrieved when I saw 25. I don't understand why you, a person from the Chinese faction in the plot, feel like you are being suppressed all the time.

What a unique historical paradise setting. The author's narrative skills are very strong, the historical atmosphere is well created, and the writing is true and cruel.

The quality of the book is very high, the writing style and settings are very good. It can be said that it is better than most books on the market, but I feel that the shortcomings are also obvious: 1. It describes too many things and is too professional. For example, take Ming Jun. In essence, readers only want to read cool stories, but you use a lot of pen and ink to describe the scene environment, background world view, and character construction. I feel it is not necessary. 2 The main line is very clear, it is the characters that drive the plot, which is good. 3 There are not many cool points, and I am very dissatisfied. Since the world is infinite, it should be given a few cool golden fingers. 4 In fact, the pace of this book is relatively slow, focusing too much on foreshadowing and the rationality of the story. To be fair, I think your writing skills are good, but it is too traditional. Your writing style is more traditional literature, focusing more on the description of characters and scenes, and the storytelling and excitement are weak. I said, you have already written about the infinite flow of the world, why not enjoy it all in one breath, even if it is no brainer. The book is good, that's all. I wish you success.

I like this title the best, but what we wrote is really good. I also saw a chapter recommendation from a certain master. Come on!

Pig's Knuckle: I am the Overlord of the Ming Dynasty.

Cool, the author is so strong! I have read hundreds of books, but few can write war scenes well. Either the protagonist is showing off, cheating and crushing him. If it's time to fight, do a stream of consciousness and pass it by in one go. But your dialogue before the battle, the atmosphere and the details of the battle are all very professional, and the more you watch, the more interesting it becomes. Although it is written in a traditional book style and is not refreshing, the quality is really high. Just maintain this level and keep going!

I like the character of the protagonist very much, he is decisive in killing and calm in the face of danger.

I've read Chapter 11. It's very well written so far. It has the talent of fairy grass, and the scenes are very big. As long as the author can control it, it will be a good book.

Since it is unlimited flow, I will pay attention to one thing. What are the strengthening systems of the historical paradise? Is it the system of Shensan? Is it a single soldier or a group flow?

Such a straight ass,,,,, well I'm fine

I came across it by accident and just finished it First of all, I will give my review. It is an absolute fairy grass. The only problem is that it is slow to warm up. In addition, I really don't understand the ranking of this book. With this quality, why is it not even in the top ten? A few more words, the author must maintain a good mentality, never be a eunuch, good stories are slowly polished Don't pursue short-term and fast, long-term is king As long as you persist until it is put on the shelf, I will contribute a full order, and I will do what I say

First time posting, hoping to collect one hundred singles and eight generals

Wanli in the Ming Dynasty was okay. Although the money was often deducted, I could still eat enough. The officers and soldiers of the guard station carried their guns and went into battle, which was worthy of the kindness of Lao Zhu's family.

I am also a regular reader of the previous book. I started to catch up on the last one after I finished the game... It was finished too fast.

Not poking or poking, the writing is very good. If it is written vigorously, it will be fully revised if it does not collapse. Come on and write

The review is so high. I will take a look at this volume after it is finished.

Great book! Must order all before it crashes! Come on, author!

Come on, I'll support you when you put it on the shelves

People from the Qing Dynasty who crossed over were not afraid of meeting Nurhaci, who was a savage chief among the white mountains and black waters 🙂🙂🙂🤓

Grumpy Man

I have two questions after seeing the Battle of Xiangping. 1. Why is the ratio of the number of people one to five? I don't know much about this period of history, but since there are official forces from the Qing Dynasty in the paradise, there should also be official forces from the Ming Dynasty, and not surprisingly it should be larger than the Qing Dynasty. 2. I don't understand why the protagonist is not allowed to use guns in front of local characters. The language habits of the Paradise people in the article are obviously different from those of the locals, and the monkey arms are still animal arms.

Talking about Yue Shuihu wearing the robes, belts and short bats of the four famous catchers, does Gongsun Sheng in this really know magic?

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