China Entertainment 09: Starting from Intercepting Hu Xiao Shen Yang

Well written bro. I support you, it's not on the shelves yet, the monthly vote has been cast

Not bad for the money but good looking, one sentence passed. The transition from daytime fireworks to daylight was quick and no problem, but the author worked hard on Moji's dialogues, which were all witty dialogues for the supporting characters. Er Zhang, Jiang Wen, and Liu Yifei all looked like idiots. . . The heroine was also forced to post the plot and went to the Northeast for no reason. You must know that people of Liu Xiaoli's generation look down on Er Er Zhuan. In fact, Er Er Zhuan is really a folk custom. . . The two circles simply cannot come together. Just a group of young people, a group of nightclubs. Even if they are both in the entertainment industry, there is almost no intersection between the two. . . .

The first hurdle for a comedian is appearance. He can't be too handsome or not handsome. This kind of appearance is much better than that of other types of actors. Why did Happy Twist fail later and all wanted to be the protagonist? Are their looks enough? For example, Fei Xiang's appearance is as good as Ng Meng-tat's, and he can be a golden leaf, but he can't play the protagonist.

Can this writing be published on Qidian?

It's really disgusting that you cut off Xiao Shenyang's hair. What did you cut off? What's the point of cutting off a three-gun shot?

The heroine who appears at the beginning is Lao Liu. The author has to go to the Internet cafe to get character cards while screwing. I have to wait for two days to rest. I'm sorry, brother.

The author is not from the north. I saw in Chapter 43 that you wrote about Lao Zhao at the wine table. The master was insulted by others and the apprentice was not allowed to join. This is probably impossible in reality. It's a bit taken for granted.

This is over a hundred chapters! Is the male protagonist already awesome? The title of the book is selling dog meat with sheep's head! I'm so lonely... I browsed through the directory and didn't cut anything. What's the point? The most important thing, "Not Short of Money", isn't there? Even if it is written later that there is no shortage of money, there is no need to cut it off. They are already super famous and super rich. 😨

This is no writing at all! It's all vernacular

Chapter 2: Force the master to offend others

As for the protagonist's teacher's catastrophe, do you still want to help him, dreaming about it? Once on the boat, you can't help yourself. What kind of energy do you have to pull him away?

Let's cut it. After reading it for a while, emm, you don't have this talent.. If you write it down, it is estimated that hundreds of thousands of words will be finished. You have not accumulated enough writing skills and the time has been wasted. You have not made any money. I don't know if the average subscription can exceed 500. You can read more other people's books and accumulate them at a different time.

Why don't you let me have some brains at the beginning?

I felt physically uncomfortable after reading a few chapters

What should be written should be written in one stroke, and the places that should be written in one stroke are grinding and chirping.

I always have an inexplicable feeling, what the hell are you writing about? At first I thought you were just a little Karami, acting in sketches and so on, but you ended up filming a movie. And then you and Zhao Benshan are so close, why did you try to intercept Hu Xiaoshenyang's opportunity? ? ?

Why is it so similar to the one from China Entertainment that became famous overnight?

After seeing the protagonist's all kinds of pretense and Xiang Zuo singing left and right hands in slow motion, I really can't stand it anymore 😰

I was really blown away when I saw the one who got Xie Dajiao pregnant. He was a fucking expert.

I suspect that the author is underage, but any normal adult would not be able to write the scene where he and Zhang Weiping got into trouble at the wine party at the beginning.

There are many personal opinions. But I don't know much about it

What a boring book, the characters are flat, forced conflicts, and the villain is mentally retarded

To be honest, I really can't stand it. Not realistic. Zhao Benshan was already famous for his deductions before he fell ill. People gave him the nickname Zhao Laoji.

Seek truth from facts! Really bad! Very bad! Cut it!

Already have several poisonous points, I am really too lazy to discuss it with the author, so hurry up and get rid of the eunuch. 😤😤

It's better not to be on the shelves, not so watery, but now it's on the shelves, it's even more watery.

This is the second book I've seen that cuts off Hu Xiaoshenyang's "Not Short of Money". That one was also quite well written.