I Can Equip Weird Items

The plot and everything are very good, and the world view is also very good, but the protagonist is a bit lustful, too lusty, and I suspect that it is the author Xin Yayi.

There are emotional scenes in the supernatural novel, but the writing is not very good, and it is a bit unnatural.

For the first equipment, find a cat cafe. For a few dozen yuan, just pet the cat twice. The cat will shed enough hair for you to complete the mission dozens of times.

It's okay, but the emotional line is too stretched. I suggest the author write less about this part, or go to further study.

The subsequent plot becomes more and more complicated as the protagonist woman progresses easily, and the efforts of the protagonist and others become a joke.

Does the author lack common sense? Don't know how far 20 kilometers is? Before writing, could you check whether it is 20 kilometers from your home to the other side of the city? The protagonist wants to run in a park 20 kilometers away from home, that's right! It's a straight line distance! ! ! Straight line distance! ! ! Straight line distance! ! ! 20,000 Meters! Or walk slowly, it will take 3 to 4 hours! ! ! That's all. It can also explain that the protagonist is afraid of being seen by people he knows. It turns out that a person who lives near his home is also walking his dog in this park. Are you sure he is not following you? Walk the dog and run 20 kilometers! ! ! ! Running from one end of the city to the other. Think about it before writing and understand the concept of distance before writing.

It can be seen that the author is obviously a novice in writing, and the plot twists are not only blunt, but completely forced. Take two plots as an example: two public officials wearing black trench coats walking on the street are particularly eye-catching in themselves, and it is normal for passers-by to cast strange glances at them. But one of them had no basis and just relied on intuition to determine that there was something wrong with the protagonist. It was clear that he deliberately created conflicts, and the subsequent related affairs were all made up. Looking at the main task part, the protagonist needs to complete three thefts by using a golden finger to solidify the entries. He had already done this to stray dogs twice, and the last time he had to find the woman holding the dog, and pretended to attack the dog in the name of filming a show. What's outrageous is that the other party agreed easily, and even took the initiative to add WeChat afterwards. Anyone with a discerning eye can see that an ambiguous line will be arranged later. The overall plot is like being forcibly bound and spliced ​​with high-strength ropes. The logic is full of loopholes and completely ignores common sense.

The economic system is broken. Weird items only sell for 10,000, and ordinary handicraft knives sell for 40,000. It's outrageous.

I usually read novels that are full of criticism, so I kind of want to taste it 🪖 But! ! ! After reading about ten chapters, I just can't bear it anymore! 💀 The protagonist's more obvious personality is: [Retard], [Diaosi] I won't go into details! Brothers, you can try it yourself! 👍

It's quite outrageous. It's forced to cheat and cheat into the devouring mechanism. What kind of god would be so surprised by watching a movie?

It was over. I was still interested at first, but when I saw the second picture, I was persuaded to give up. There is a reason why the results are so poor and there are so few comments 🙂

No matter how beautiful a woman is, her eyes are just her eyes. She always has beautiful eyes and a charming body. Even if she is a woman, she reacts to the protagonist. Your emotional drama is too affecting. The other plots are okay. This is the most unbearable thing.

Has petty theft simply evolved to the point where you kill people first and then pick up the loot?

There is indeed something wrong with the protagonist's character

It sucks. All the combat power has been destroyed. Before everyone is defeated, there is no one with a sane mind. The setting is imposed and it comes out as soon as I think about it. The front part is okay, but the writing in the back is messy. It comes out as soon as I think about it.

I think it's okay so far. The author will write according to your plan. An author who can be influenced by readers at will will not write a good book. The readers you attract now are attracted based on your previous content. Once you make changes based on the suggestions of some readers, the subsequent content will be separated from the previous content, and the readers attracted by you will disperse. Figure out your current audience.

The protagonist saves others and saves himself... All by hanging up and regaining his life

I've read Chapter 63, and the creativity feels a bit confusing. There are weird rules, cracks in other worlds, and weird realms. The most important thing is that the protagonist obviously learns how to use a knife, and there are sticks throughout the fighting scenes. Warriors appear again for no reason, and there are realm divisions. The protagonist knows that there are warriors but doesn't learn sword skills. In short, it feels like killing monsters is just a stick? Killing is all done with one knife!

The protagonist keeps saying that he is a human being, but there is a price for doing anything. There are so many entries, and some entries can obviously be copied in large quantities to enhance the national strength, but they just don't do it 😅 The treasures produced by the polar branches obtained are useless in their own hands and cannot be exchanged for the country. Will I lose a little to enhance the national strength? Cleaning up powerful creatures in the ocean requires a price for the leaders of a large region in our country 😒 What do you think? Make sacrifices for all mankind, let your country pay the price, and have a pierced head Aren't there any weird objects abroad? Go grab it, just keep your eyes on your own three-acre piece of land Chunchun's fucking nest is full of chaos

Apart from anything else, how long does it take for you to be single before you meet a girl like a chick? ? ? If you don't know how to write emotional dramas, don't write them. A city is so big and it happens by chance. It's now 2026 🙂🙂🙂

It was written by a junior high school student without any social experience. The attributes of the Holy Mother are very high.

The creativity is okay, but the writing is so rubbish. It's hard for the protagonist to steal something from a small animal. It's so stupid.

Although there are all kinds of minor flaws, I can still read it if I endure it. It just feels a bit pity. I feel that I could have written better and the author still didn't polish it seriously. Alas.

In fact, I feel that although the front part is a little bit poisonous, the writing is okay. But I couldn't bear it anymore in the endless jungle on the shelf. Do I have to put poison before putting it on the shelves? Generally, in the plot design of novels, the protagonist will be invincible in the early stage. For example: before defeating a BOSS, readers will be informed of the protagonist's abilities, and readers will be able to clearly know that the protagonist's abilities will definitely enable him to defeat the BOSS. As a result, you suddenly came to the endless jungle before it was put on the shelves. I originally thought that this endless jungle was for you to complete the condition of staying in the forest for 100 hours. Then rely on your own wisdom to discover loopholes in the rules. As a result, the protagonist directly stared at the rules to kill others, paused for 10 seconds, and triggered the rules without any confidence in his heart. As a result, the panel showed its power and swallowed up the strange rules. It will make readers feel that the protagonist is very stupid. There is no foreshadowing panel in the front to swallow up the rules, and the protagonist himself doesn't know it. If the panel cannot swallow the rules, is the protagonist already dead? I remember I read your book when it was first on the new book list. I read more than 20 chapters at that time, but I forgot about it because the updates were too slow later. I accidentally browsed it again today and found that it is still limited to free, but I didn't even see it on the shelves. You can't stand this endless forest anymore.

If the stinky tofu is really rotten, who will eat it?

I really can't understand it at all. There are loopholes in the logic of the plot and the economic system. There is no place that is not confusing.

The subject matter of this novel is not bad, right? The author's writing is too broad. 98% Of the entire book is centered on the protagonist, and only 2% of the supporting characters. Moreover, the protagonist improves his strength quickly, but ordinary people improve their strength faster, faster than the protagonist. He does not write about how supporting characters and ordinary people improve their strength. Anyway, the first few dozen chapters are about the whole country. A few inner alchemy realms, and then dozens of chapters in the middle of a few months, there are inner alchemy realms all over the country, and dozens of people appear in the air control realm. These people improve faster than the protagonist. How to improve the strength is not mentioned. Anyway, after the protagonist improves his strength, people everywhere in the country improve their strength! The writing is too broad, like a running account. I estimate that the book will be completed in about 300 to 350 chapters.

It can only be said that at first I thought it was a mysterious revival, but later I found out that it was just an ordinary battle force.

I originally thought it was a good fantasy novel, but in Chapter 19, a person from a company was sacrificed, and the official didn't care. I felt very speechless. Alas, I felt blocked. I wanted to read it but didn't want to read it, so I withdrew it.

It's awkward, right? Newcomers should write honestly and simply and gradually improve their level, don't worry about the beginning and the end.