A Historical Game Across the Myriad Worlds: Starting With a Showdown at Xuanwu Gate

I just want to say that I walked away silently. I am tired of reading this kind of historical articles. If it would have been popular 20 years ago, I would be the creator. It is not suitable for this kind of historical articles, so I walked away silently. This kind of historical articles are all about starting a team with the winner. When you know that he has won, you join and take advantage of it. No matter what the difficulty is, you have the script in hand. When the loser needs it most, you go on stage and give to the loser, then you help the winner. With or without you, others can handle it. Generally, the author fixes it in a routine to express how important the protagonist is. Wouldn't it hurt to touch your conscience? The difficulty of writing is simple.

I'm here to see the Xuanwu Gate. You want to show me Werewolf?

Although I can understand it, there are too many slang words. For example, can't the words "changing hands" and "passing the wind line" be replaced with more straightforward ones? Wouldn't it be nice to write about people who change their families and spread rumors with these straightforward words?

To be honest, I was confused when I saw it, and I was persuaded to leave.

He has no power, speaks incomprehensibly and strangely, and everyone he does is a genius. His words are hidden, and he is still a Xuanwu sect! ! The kind of operation you wrote has no chance for Li Shimin.

Does it look good? Brothers, can you leave your honest evaluation?

A copy of 30-40 chapters will be enough

It's too chaotic. It's too chaotic. There are a lot of names of people appearing, and the shop is covered with darkness. The main line is all gone.

The writing style is good, but your writing style is too biased. Your writing style is suitable for writing detective stories.

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