Douluo: Xiao Xiao, I Am Going to Control You Severely

Put it on, put it on, you still have amnesia, what do you want? Do you have to eat soft food? Just like strong ones? From pure bt

The current plot is about writing whatever you dream about. Wouldn't it be better to write the contest according to the previous plot development? Judging from the plot you wrote earlier, the readers who came in to watch it are just to watch and develop. Just put in the plot of traveling through time and losing amnesia in the middle. What will be done later on to compare the sky? I'll pull it in the east and pull it in the west to find the four-faced thing that was stitched out at the end. As long as you finish writing the plot of the cultivation side, and then start writing the time-travel plot for the protagonist to go through and be trained in chapters, and then add a curtain at the end, everyone won't say you're bad. I inserted a lot of settings halfway through the writing, and I still deserve to be scolded for not handling it well.

I hope there will be less live content in the future and more psychological descriptions of Xiao Xiao

After reading Chapter 3, the protagonist is talking to the NPC. It doesn't look like playing a game, but like time travel. "I don't want to disappoint you." You're wasting your time playing.

This book starts out very well. It develops a flow and adds chaos. It is simple and crude to follow the plot in the early stage and kill everyone in the later stage. You can also see the ultimate form of other supporting characters. But what is that mess at the back? It's a live broadcast, a lottery, a store, a soul-transformation game, a stand-alone game, and an online world. So disappointed

This book would be useless if I joined Shrek.

The writing of Xiaoxiao's development is amazing, and you can see the little ingenuity at a glance. Other than that, it's all ghosts (sad). The live broadcast or real-life settings are actually within the acceptable range, but it is difficult to write the plot of the supporting characters and cobble together the original plot. The writing of those ten chapters is really bad, and the popularity is lost.

I thought the real world was devoid of demons and only the protagonist had special abilities. As a result, there is still a revival of spiritual energy in reality.

It is recommended that starting from the protagonist's time traveling through Douluo and then losing his memory, delete everything and rewrite it. Otherwise, I will have no interest in continuing to read. It feels like I have been fed a mouthful of history.

I have been waiting for you to enter the world of Douluo. I really went in, but I ended up going in with amnesia. Then you are abused in various ways, and you still have to rely on Xiaoxiao to control you.

Male perspective, female body, doesn't that mean we need to stick to it?

Here is an explanation of the relationship between the physical fitness of a Douluo soul master and the years of absorbing soul rings, so that some readers will not be confused. If there was no whale gum, it would be exactly the first ring, 400 years. The second ring, 400+400=800, the second ring can absorb 800 years. The third ring, 800+800=1600~2500 (This is where the increase in soul power brings about an improvement in physical fitness. Different types of soul rings improve physical fitness differently. For example, the power-type soul beast soul ring will improve more physical fitness, etc., And whether there is medicinal bath, etc., There will be obvious range changes.) The fourth ring, 1600+1600=3200~5000. The fifth ring, 3200+3200=6400~10000. 6, 6400+6400=12800～20000 7, 12800+12800=25600～40000 8, 25600+2560 0=51200～80000 9, 51200+51200=102400～160000 How many years of soul rings can be absorbed can roughly improve a person's physique for many years. The lower limit for ordinary people, the upper limit for geniuses. You can see from this that Yan Shaozhe's ninth ring is black, and it must be that one of the previous rings has stretched his crotch. Of course, the above-mentioned absorption years plus as many years as you want are only applicable to the normal absorption of soul rings or soul power. As Dou Sanzhong said, you can use the Doukai to improve your physical fitness first. During the process of absorbing the soul ring, the energy of heaven and earth will be involved. You can get on the bus first and then pay for it, and your physical fitness will soar directly. But Dou Er Huo Gua's kind of sacrifice does not follow the above rules. It can be seen from the chapters of Tianmeng Sacrifice and Ten Thousand Years Third Ring that the sacrifice absorbs all the energy of the soul beast, without the participation of the power of heaven and earth. If the soul master's physical fitness is not enough, the performance of the soul ring and the improved physical fitness are the soul master's current upper limit (such as the soul skill list after Huo Gua initially absorbed Tian Meng Now it's just a hundred thousand years, and it will be brought up later. If you accept the Ice Emperor's sacrifice and add a torso bone, you can only absorb a thousand-year soul ring. There is no need to add a Dou San soul master to level 50 and go straight to level 70. The stronger 100,000-year sixth ring, the stronger 100,000-year seventh ring), are all the subsequent slow release of the soul to improve the soul master's physical fitness and soul ring soul skill performance.

I'm speechless. There are restrictions on participating in the freshman competition. The reasons for the key restrictions are nonsense. The reasons for Shrek Academy are nonsense. Xiao Xiao's status can be said to be not inferior to that of Poseidon Pavilion. If he is old, Shrek will not betray Xiao Xiao. Although the system punishment is added, it is still nonsense. The author is really making dumplings for a plate of vinegar. He has no life left.

In the God-man plot, the author didn't even finish explaining the world line that he normally traveled through, so he started writing about other world lines. I'm afraid I won't be able to edit it anymore, but I think it will be a mess of words once I come up with it. I haven't finished writing about traveling through time to compete in a competition. What's more, you also wrote about traveling into the game to participate in a competition. It's already confusing enough, but it hasn't been explained yet. This will add things from other world lines, and what does it mean to write the plot of the competition in other world lines again. I really want to create a game plot and add a sky screen to write other world lines. It will also be the same game, and then there will be hundreds of chapters on the water, right?

What is written in the back is really like a running account, pouring water into the dead, but when you look at the actual content, it is actually just that little. The wait-and-see party who are still watching can really run away.

Ever since the protagonist entered the Douluo Continent in person, and there was a problem with time retrieval and the memory was retained, the plot has become more and more boring. It is really boring to describe the protagonist and Xiao Xiao alone after they are separated. It is not interesting at all. The protagonist has no personality charm and attraction at all. The last few chapters of Huo Yuhao are even more boring. They are completely separated from the protagonist Xiao Xiao. It is completely boring. You return three chapters and compress it into one chapter. The most interesting thing about this book is that the protagonist controls Xiao Xiao. You are almost throwing away the title of your book now. You are increasingly separating the protagonist from Xiao Xiao. It is very boring.

Forget it if you suddenly travel through time, just treat it as pushing the main line. What's the point of double comparison? It's not easy, right? Or is it someone else? TM's reward was in vain before

Introduction: Is there a female channel? 😒

I thought there was no magic in the real world, but in the end I had to create something extraordinary. Extraordinary things are also related to games.

It's really a bit disgusting. I was looking forward to the follow-up plot, but after I participated in an offline competition, I thought I was playing against others. Unexpectedly, the person disappeared suddenly and disappeared through the book. That scene was really unbelievable. The follow-up was written randomly, which made the originally good plot line collapse. Did the author suddenly suffer from some serious illness? What kind of bad taste is this? He is still writing. I usually feel that I rarely do this, but really, it is a bit of a waste to a very good work.

Things have been going well since the live broadcast started. A "puzzle" that all readers know about was solved for three chapters at the beginning. The response after Xiaoxiao's true identity was revealed was also very dull. Then he was maliciously targeted and was not allowed to use soul skills, and the low-level soul tools were only willing to give so many places. Regardless of the reader's perspective, would Shrek really not be scolded for doing this? I'm afraid he has collected black money from the Dai family... Of course, the author said that one person's combat power cannot be compared to the fusion skills of the two martial arts souls on the opposite side. I personally feel that Xiaoxiao's physical and mental strength may not be able to defeat the two valuables on the opposite side. After all, their fusion has forward swing. Then I'm also fascinated by the Martial Soul Fusion Skill. Why don't you go back to it? Isn't the elixir consumed as system currency? Can I buy this with money? I feel like the live broadcast is a complete failure. Isn't there going to be an arena game later? Forget about making some strategy videos, but live broadcast all the steps to develop yourself? Is it true that no high-level player can kill you if you are so crazy?

Bad review, NPC can actually see the player

Don't read it, kids. This book is going to kill me. It's well written. The main character loses his memory and travels to Douluo. In the end, there's even a sky curtain. All I can say is that it's a big piece of stone.

No, buddy, what are you writing next? ? ? The protagonist inexplicably traveled through time and space, suffered inexplicable amnesia, and even faded away in the last few pictures 😰

What the hell is your sudden amnesia and time travel? Crazy? Abandoned

The author has completely let himself go. Ever since he traveled to the past, he has no idea what he is writing about.

In a nutshell, it's a bummer and a bad ending.

Now the author has turned a blind eye to what is going on outside the window😰

The ending is really bad 😂

This opening setting is a piece of shit. It is enough to set the protagonist to play a mysterious game alone. Dou Er has no other variables except the protagonist. It is enough to make Dou Er enjoyable. If other people in the real world can play it, what is the use of this setting?