Chinese Showbiz: The Rising Stars’ Top-Tier Star Boyfriend

Your writing is upsetting, and reading it makes me feel even worse. Being a scumbag is one thing, but acting all high and mighty is another.

There are quite a few issues. At the beginning, Noon Sunshine snatched a pre-selected drama from Huace Media, and when they were accused of suppressing the show, they simply clarified the situation and that was it. After it became popular, they went to play a supporting role in Joy of Life. Was it really necessary for them to ride on the coattails of the show's success? What does the success of Joy of Life have to do with you, a supporting actor?

The opening shouldn't have mentioned him joining Daylight Entertainment. If he wanted to act in "A Love So Beautiful," he should have joined Huace Media directly. Otherwise, why would he be cast as the male lead? Other companies signed contracts specifically to promote Hu Yitian, and even after Hu Yitian's scandal, he still landed several leading roles.

That's awful... The character of the boat girl was well-written, but she's just so awful...

The latest chapter has somewhat ruined the whole book. The biggest difference between your protagonist and other light romance novels is that your protagonist has some conscience, and you've been emphasizing this point, which led to the creation of the love triangle and made readers believe that these three girls thought they could be the protagonist's only one. Now that the protagonist has lost his conscience, there's no longer any sense of suspense.

Future Memories: No System, No Cheat Codes (Ordinary Family Background, Struggle for Success) 😡 The protagonist signs with Daylight Entertainment and enters the entertainment industry, building connections daily and participating in hit dramas 🪖

Either stop pursuing a harem, or you're already like this with the first two, still so unrestrained, unable to control the boundaries, and too afraid to retaliate with psychological manipulation. I can understand a Sichuan man being afraid of his wife, but you're a time traveler, writing it like this is practically a recipe for disaster! You scumbag shouldn't be playing the romance card.

If one doesn't work, just switch. Whether it's Nai Xiao, Chen Duling, or Ju Jingyi (whose reputation shouldn't collapse), just write about them casually. Don't focus on just one person.

The flaw of this book is that it signed a contract with Daylight Entertainment right from the beginning, but Daylight Entertainment didn't provide any resources for the protagonist. The protagonist became popular immediately, and they even let them invest in the studio. What's the point of that?

Your male lead character isn't suited for a romance novel with multiple female leads; he's only suitable for a 85-episode series with one or two female leads. You wrote the main story well, but continuing to add more female leads later on made it less interesting.