Journey to the West: Starting from Shituoling to Build a Fairy Dynasty on Earth

Shituoling, → Corpse Forest, A kind of Buddhist practice, Impure Temple, White Bone Temple, etc. They are not just cruel, but cruel with purpose. Everyone under me is fish and meat

There are many books about Journey to the West, but there are currently very few works that combine shelters and building buildings This book starts with the collapse of Shituoling, and you can watch the protagonist find a way out of a desperate situation. It is really well written The protagonist and the supporting characters have fairly distinct personalities, but they do seem to be a bit new. The writing is a bit jerky, but it does not harm the advancement of the story.

Those who are interested in the work can provide concepts and definitions of monsters and monsters, which may appear in the work.

😁The guy who wrote Shituoling last time always asked the protagonist to practice martial arts

It is best to write something that is different from other novels. There are many construction novels now and it is necessary to show differences.

Can you insist on writing a million words? Will he become a eunuch in a few dozen chapters?

This is not a cultivator, this is a tower defense game

Take the first step in the long march of thousands of miles. Push yourself harder. First write well and then make progress little by little.

So far, the plot is relatively smooth and there are no obvious poisonous points The writing is also good and worth recommending I just hope that the author can come up with new ideas in the direction of integrating construction and Journey to the West.

Focusing on how the human race has become the fourth level of the world in this world Heaven and Underworld Western Bliss and Ksitigarbha The demon clan has dragon clan, Sun Wukong and other seven saints If the human race wants to have its own power, it must have its own shelter and its own powerful exercises suitable for human practice.

Guess if the monkey can enter the sanctuary?

Well enough! It's a bit like the Lord's story with the background of Journey to the West. (? Anyway, I think it's okay)

Group portraits are a good direction, but there are already methods and methods If the author wants to write a group portrait, there must be a way to unite everyone It is better to be newer

1. There should be more than just these two shelters in the ruins. If the Earth Temple has a barrier, then the Mountain Temple should also have a corresponding barrier. Even the Earth Immortal should have a corresponding barrier. As the eyes of Tiantian Ting, stare at this piece of fat? 2. The rainy season is coming, which means more monsters riot. Will the protagonist encounter new monsters? 3. The Earth Temple is not protected by the rule that non-humans cannot enter or exit. Does this mean that the Earth Temple is completely likely to be attacked by those monsters in disguise?

Some small suggestions for the author: 1 In Journey to the West, the existence of the human race is indeed very weak. There are still many human items that can be used as magical powers or magic weapons to promote the plot 2. In Journey to the West, there are some particularly awesome human races, such as Yang Jian, who refuses to obey the call, such as Yuan Shoucheng, and the judge of the underworld. Can they also be considered to become protagonists or supporting roles? What is the immortal dynasty on earth? One person cannot become an immortal dynasty

You must definitely practice it, the five-color divine light Otherwise, you know the plot, and the Samadhi Divine Wind. With these two magical powers, you can definitely walk sideways After seizing the two qi of yin and yang, the one that can evolve all things After practicing, you can have the magical power of the two qi of yin and yang, such as yin and yang. Master of the Great Capture Yin and Yang two qi diagram, yin and yang two qi fists, palms, fingers, speed The famous magical powers in Journey to the West are numerous, such as the Buddha's, holding the Buddha's kingdom in the palm, which is also a kind of universe in one's sleeve, and the magical power of space The protagonist must master the law of power and be basically invincible in the same class

First, upgrade to fight monsters Where do the monsters come from? Will it be endless? What to do if all the Bone Demons in Bone Town are defeated? Will the origin of these strange objects be explained later? Or do you want to change the map after completing the game? If you change the map after completing the game, then the author seems to have blocked the current road Second, map expansion The current one is Bone Town, and then several other towns? Can the demon crystal be used as energy to support the protagonist's practice? Otherwise, when will we be able to upgrade to the realm of saints and tear apart the Three Saints of the Lion and Camel Ridge with our hands? It can be seen that the author is indeed a newcomer, with strong writing skills and ideas, but the follow-up development of the plot still needs to be considered.

This is Journey to the West, where have the formations gone? Not to mention the Twelve Heavenly Gods and Demons Formation, Zhoutian Xingdou Formation and other awesome formations, the Ten Jue Formation must be arranged anyway.

Is there any internal investment? When will the contract be signed?

For example, the Eight-Nine Mysterious Skills, the Seventy-two Transformations, the Golden Cudgel, and the Fire-Pointed Spear Will other characters from Journey to the West appear one by one?

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