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I read about a hundred chapters and felt that I had encountered a masterpiece, so I ordered them all. However, the more I read later, the more I frowned. The main plot had almost no sense of existence. Various complicated branch plots laid the foundation for the protagonist, but there was no progress at all in the main plot. In the latest chapter, the protagonist has accepted a lot of girls. It's very satisfying, but the protagonist now only has one Dawn Leader, and the queen is still responsible for government affairs. It stands to reason that the elf girl, the undead girl, the witch girl, the vampire girl, the cupid girl can all be divided into different stages of the main plot. It is like a light novel with one or two girls in one volume. By the way, you can push the progress of regaining France, making red France, and training crazily with the protagonist's abilities. When the recovery reaches a certain level, the three major churches will confront the three major churches and engage in a decisive battle. Isn't it nice to write like this? I could laugh when I saw Jessica and Ivy as children, but when I saw Melanie, I just wanted to know when the protagonist would start farming and training soldiers, marry the queen, and regain France.

Every scene with a female character makes people feel angry. At the critical moment, she is forced to turn her wits into a cumbersome vase, and everyone is Hans.

Now that I have read Chapter 116, let me share my feelings. First, the slowdown in plot development caused by the mixture of plot advancement and daily life is acceptable. The plot is definitely a good plot, and the map settings are well developed. Two, the salty fish character of the protagonist. It makes the protagonist appear to be aimless and directionless, and even though he is familiar with the plot, he does not use the plot to do anything for himself. He feels that he can only wait for the opportunity to pass when he feels that he has something at his fingertips (or at a very low cost), or he is willing to be a salted fish and wait for the pie to fall from the sky. This brings a very bad look and experience. Being familiar with the plot will not only bring the disadvantages to the protagonist as mentioned above, but also bring a lot of meaningless and repetitive complaints and psychological activities of the protagonist himself, thus making the plot longer. (For example, the protagonist's various psychological activities and complaints about Leonard in the article prevented me from seeing a bit of the protagonist's own spirit. Instead, in the repeated psychological activities, I felt the protagonist's fear of this role, which also made the article drag on.) Subjective initiative is very important. I wanted to see a positive protagonist, but I saw the negative side, which made me feel quite frustrated. Three, the heroine and the second heroine. There's not much to say about the heroine. As the poster said, she feels a little silly and sweet. Even if the plot afterwards has some supplements, it still feels a little weird. The setting of Voldemort, the second heroine, is really unpleasant, especially after the protagonist has told the second heroine the consequences of her own future (i. E. Being killed by her brother and hanging on the city gate), she still has to lie on the ground (i. E. Help Leonard). This is really difficult for me to understand. (There is reason and evidence when talking about future plots, and the female lead can be sure that these things are possible) (I even maliciously speculated whether even if Leonard cheated on the protagonist, the female lead could still choose to continue to voluntarily fall to the ground) In short, the attribute of Voldemort is undesirable, unless the protagonist himself is his younger brother. Four, supporting roles. Leonard, I have to wonder if this guy is the protagonist. There is a sister (i. E. The second female lead) who can help her even if she is killed, the protagonist's psychological fear of this guy, and the future achievements of this guy in the original plot, as well as the protagonist's unprecedented ruthlessness, initiative to fight for it, and the ability to hold back, making him a proper demonic protagonist. Leonard's plot driving force far exceeds that of the protagonist. The other supporting characters are remarkable, they are all pretty good, they have distinct personalities but don't overwhelm them. Fifth, the above is what I said when I was unhappy, and I did not say anything good about the book. However, since I can read more than a hundred chapters, it still shows that the work itself is acceptable except for these points. In terms of setting and style, it has a very Western fantasy flavor. On the one hand, I hope that the author can slightly repair these points to make the reading smoother and the readers more comfortable, or improve it in subsequent plots (for example, the protagonist kills Leonard) so that the readers can enjoy it, which is also a good idea. On the other hand, I think it's impossible. After all, every article written has its own internal logic. Maybe I just can't see it. Finally, I wish the author smooth writing, smooth writing, and great sales of his works. (The above are all based on my true feelings. If there is any offense, I apologize.)

I have read more than 100 chapters, and the second cheat in the title only appears a few times. I suggest changing the title of the book.

The characterization of this book is still not interesting, the character pace is relatively fast, and Leonard's death is too hasty... There is also the problem of facial expression in characterization. You can open a few more "extra" chapters of each character to deepen the character creation Too many heroines is also a problem, in fact, the queen's presence is It's not too strong, and it doesn't have a sense of immersion.. In terms of plot, the rhythm is not well grasped. To describe it, it is like eating a buffet, getting a hot pot before finishing the barbecue, mixing Chinese food and Western food and swallowing it in one bite. It tastes like salt in your mouth, and you can't taste it. Moreover, you are choking, and you don't have any "water" to moisten it. The door to the Kingdom of Death was closed too hastily, God did it with a snap of his fingers In general, it is recommended, just like the fast food restaurant downstairs. Although it is not very delicious, it is acceptable for an occasional meal.

After reading more than ninety chapters, to be honest, the plot started to stretch out after the first twenty chapters. After that, the more interesting plots such as the system's second-level narration disappeared. For example, when fighting the second female lead, the system's second-level narration was not allowed to appear to add a little explanation and interest. It kept playing tricks. I can only say that the introduction is fraudulent. Overall, the book is ordinary. The plots that should appear do not appear, and the things that should not appear appear frequently. This is because the author's writing style and ideas are a bit biased.

Author, you have grown up and you have to learn to add updates by yourself. If you are like this, I can't even subscribe to it. You understand what I mean! ?

I have never been a fan of Western fantasy, but because I am more interested in secondary school and comedy, I accidentally discovered this book. I started reading it in January last year and ended it in July this year. Although this book is occasionally watery, the language is humorous, the setting is novel and interesting, and the characters are flesh and blood. The best part is the first half. I still remember William's father and that Hans. Let's look at the setting later, giants, elves, time magic, going back in time... They are all super exciting to watch! Of course, this book is not perfect. Some of the characters are a bit unrefined (such as some girls). In order to keep the plot from collapsing, mechanical gods are occasionally used (such as bread that ignores levels and is effective for everyone). The last part of the book is a little awkward. Since returning from the past, the book has been avalanche from setting to characters (mainly water, and then the funny content has also dropped)... The most regrettable thing is that this book has no real ending, and the origin of the "system" has not been explained. The description of "different worlds" in the final chapter, I thought, was a general reference to the multiverse, the real world, the arcane continent, the spiritual world, etc. The result is just the same world. There is also the Book of Madness, which is written mysteriously and turns out to be a worm in the end! I admit this, but where is the mother of the insect? Didn't it say it had a mother? Damn it! 😡 Logically, the great salvation of all heavens and realms should begin next! I strongly recommend that you don't finish Yuyuyu and write about William's adventures in the heavens later! {"NickName":"Fish Prison in the Sky and Yuyu","UserId":321869184} 😜😆😁 Having said the objective book review, let's talk about something subjective. When I first read this book last year, I secretly hid in bed and read it, fearing that my grandma would discover it. While hiding, I felt relaxed and interesting. Later, my grandma had an accident. I sat in front of the hospital bed and stayed vigil all night. I didn't go home to sleep until dawn. During that time, I also tried to read novels to calm myself down, but I couldn't calm down either. Later, my grandma passed away and I also went to work. After working for more than a month, I quit. I always... Often looked out the window, wondering if it would be over if I jumped. In those hesitant days, my past living habits were like the anchor of my life, setting a footnote and giving me a little sense of belonging in life. For a certain period of time, what I am most looking forward to is the update of Yuyuyu! This book is my favorite book besides "The First Chaos in History" (I only comment on my personal feelings, not the writing quality). "Chaos" focuses on the characters and the atmosphere of life. And "Second Two" can occasionally make people yearn for a new world, and still make people laugh out loud in certain unhappy moments. Yuyuyu's fan base recommends everyone to join, this guy is very nice! I used to think that I was smart, but now I feel that my peers are much more mature than me in some psychological aspects. Thanks 😆, give a reward when you finish the work to celebrate!

The pace of the novel is ridiculously slow. There are more than 20 pictures, but there is no climax yet, so I didn't understand it.

After watching more than 300 pictures, I felt that the plot was not compact enough and the progress was too slow. The author occasionally intersperses combat plots when writing. Hmm, I don't know why, but it always feels a bit uninteresting. It is worth mentioning that the character descriptions are still good. The speed is also very stable. Actually, it's not bad. It's just that sometimes, when I see the middle or a certain section, I can't stand it. I think for the author, in terms of plot or main line development, even if it is a systematic article, I feel that you are also giving me water. That's it, if you like driving, I highly recommend it.

The writing is good, it can be said to be at the level of fairy grass. But it's a pity. The author should have planned it carefully before writing it. Not to mention the main plot line, it feels like the whole world is full of chaos, various characters and events appear without any foreshadowing, and there is no coherence, leaving the viewer confused. I can't stand it even if I want to watch it without thinking. It is recommended that you polish your outline before writing a book.

It is recommended that the author simply change the title of the book and revise the first few chapters. This book reminds me of that work where I had countless resurrection coins, all with interesting features and systems, and this unique system has been hidden since it appeared in the first few chapters. This does not mean that the novel is not well written. In fact, if these systems are removed, the novel is still very good, but he really just removed the selling points in the introduction and title. Well, if you want to elaborate more, this is not selling dog meat at the expense of sheep. This may be selling beef at the expense of sheep. Since so many of the later pictures have no systematic scenes at all, it would be better to just change the first few pictures and write them seriously according to an ordinary Western fantasy world. But I really still want to see the system's narration that is full of chuunibyou.

The writing of the paper is no less than that of Feiyan. It's common to see new books with rubbish titles and god-level content. I beg you, the author can crowdfund a similar name. Your bad name has ruined the book!

Mmm... It's pretty good-looking, but I came here because I wanted to see the system's secondary teasing. 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

So far, I have read that this book is based on the theme of teasing, and then uses brainstorming as a branch. Personally speaking, there are three things I don't like very much. One is that the character of the protagonist is not very likable. At the beginning, I felt that he was a little more stable, but gradually he became a character later on. It makes people feel so annoying, and I feel like I can't even be friends ヾ(￣￣)ツ, The second thing is the content, which reminds me of the sentence "selling dog meat over someone else's head." Apart from a few systematic slurs at the beginning, after reading nearly a hundred chapters, it never came up again. (′д｀ )……, The third is ability. The ability of this boundless people is really exaggerated. I always feel that with this, a lot of fun is missing ㄟ(▔ ,▔)ㄏ

This kind of person is either stupid or bad, or stupid and bad. He puts it on the line, puts it on his own, and is in the void. This kind of person is purely rhythmic, copying and pasting, and will ptsd and self-orgasm when he sees some words. In fact, the author can add a fan value limit.

This novel is interesting. The writing style is something I have never seen before. It is very unique. There are many passages that are misleading but do not cross the line and can make people laugh. It can be said that the author's first few chapters are very good and he understands people's hearts very well.

I think the novels I have invested in at Qidian will become popular. Although not as popular as everyone else, except for the book about a great god kissing his fingertips, they are all pretty good.

🤫Not bad

I have read the novel for many years and rarely comment on it. Today I had the urge to complain. I also think it would be a pity for this book to continue to be like this. First, the problem of protagonist creation: Looking at it now, I really think that the protagonist is very poorly portrayed. After reading so many pictures, I have not analyzed the protagonist's character from the author's description. Is he kind? Or evil? Advocate strength? Or do you admire wisdom? A generous person? Or a stingy person? I can't tell. Second, the protagonist's purpose: What is his purpose? Or what is the main line of this novel? I now feel that the author writes whatever comes to mind, without any purpose at all. I suspect that you have changed your outline too many times and your ideas have been completely disrupted. Third, the problem with the combat power system: The author's setting at the beginning is that this is a battle flag game. The combat power of a single player is important, and the most important thing is the strength of the army under his command. Here's the problem. Until now, I haven't seen how much effort you put into describing the troops under your command and the battles between the troops. Instead, you focus on describing the protagonist's personal combat effectiveness, and you also spend a lot of time describing 1V1 battle scenes. Fourth, the issue of the protagonist's strength: He is still at level 2, but your level 2 can kill level 5! ! ! ! This combat power system is broken! Don't make any other excuses, it's just broken! You can find an excuse to kill level 5 at level 2, but don't you want to kill demigods at level 5? Doesn't level 8 require killing gods? It is necessary for the protagonist to fight across levels, but you are too outrageous! ! There is also the issue of the protagonist's sub-professions. Take a look for yourself. There are only so many sub-professions at level 2. How many more sub-professions do you need to add at level 3? Where is level 4? Have you ever thought, is this outrageous? Fifth, the setting problem is that the seven deadly sins create seven principalities, and the nobles of each principality have different personalities. The problem is that I don't see any use in your setting at all. This setting is good, but the author has written the setting and didn't spend any words to use this setting. Isn't it a waste? There is also the setting of family training. If you set it but don't use it, you will lose it twice. It is really a waste. So much for fishing during working hours. If the author sees it, I hope it can give you some inspiration. I don't mean any harm, I just don't want such a beautiful novel to be scrapped.

As of the final chapter, there is no new data in the legion panel, please scroll forward. Some pictures failed to upload, I sent them downstairs

It's a very bad book. The worldview tries to be big but the actual writing is very empty. I want to add various details but in the end they are just details. The plot is depressing. The protagonist group is always weak and grows slowly. It is always against the wind and relies on forced coincidences to create suffering. Difficult, and relying on more coincidences + deus ex machina to get through the difficulties, which shows that the author's writing style is really bad; he often creates misunderstandings like Qiong Yao dramas, the male and female protagonists are all YY monsters, and when others are talking, he is thinking in a long way and ignoring the key content. The inner thoughts of the quantitative cycle are meaningless, as empty as the number of words; the male protagonist is set to be a big boss in time travel + system, but the result is actually a gangster + taking one step at a time + being humble to the end (after all, the weak is always fighting the strong), such an annoying time travel novel is written It is rare that the combat power system collapses. This is inevitable. In order for the male protagonist to cross-level challenges and the protagonist group to survive, the enemy must do some secondary operations that damage their combat power. But the author, you have started to collapse from the early stage. Did you really write this book with your heart? Or is it that you don't know how to write settings at all, and you just expand a matter that has been explained in a few sentences into a long inner drama like a water essay? Overall, this is a below-average, nondescript time-travel game novel. The more you read it, the more uncomfortable it becomes, so I recommend you not to read it.

I recently read the book again and sorted out the sequences that appeared in the book. Let's find faults together~

This is called a queen

I just read it, and some people said that if you can't accept the heroine, you are a virgin. People nowadays can't even accept wives. In the past, wives were the standard in novels. Isn't the queen delicious? In reality, if such a good-looking wife comes to me, I will accept it 100%.

The writing is humorous and the characters are fleshed out. It is on the same level as "Once upon a time there was a Spirit Sword Mountain". It is a good book. The two heroines currently appearing have quite potential, one is a widow and the other is a girl. They are not like the kind of heroines where the protagonist is unparalleled and is ignored. If you don't want to poke the needle, by the way, I am the queen. Some people say that the author's pace is too slow, but I really like to watch the various daily interactions between the male and female protagonists. This can make the characters more fleshed out, but the battles can be less protracted. After all, the author also said that this is not a world where extraordinary people can do whatever they want, and some of the previous battles are too heavy-handed for the 1v1 plot. Maybe I'm just a novice who likes cool writing 😅 I hope the development of the story can be under William's control, and never lead to a tragic development like the Dragon Clan. What I want to see is the story of Queen William conquering the world, with a sword of 999, and a long-legged female knight will be given away with a click.

There is no sense of getting stronger, and there is no sense of urgency. A few years before the plot begins, I don't understand why I didn't open a sub-career to increase my level attributes. The protagonist just drifts with the crowd. The undisciplined plot is accompanied by the undisciplined protagonist. He is neither evil nor smart nor diligent, and is not even as charming as the big villain the system calls him. Originally, the beginning of this book was very attractive, and it had a lot of laughs, and the writing style was good, so it should have been popular. Unfortunately, the author didn't grasp it. There was no subjective initiative to guide the protagonist or the use of the plot line made it very boring to read. No matter how many laughs the protagonist lives purely by fate, it can't make people read happily. When I read more than a hundred chapters, I couldn't hold on. The protagonist (the author) thinks too much and does too little. The regiment's combat is neither fish nor fowl. I am not active in upgrading and tasks. I am undecided whether to open Wushuang or the torrent of war. The main plot of the book also seems nondescript. Describing too many characters, dialogues, and psychological activities in the early stage will make the plot drag out (to put it bluntly, it just feels watery). In addition, the protagonist without subjective initiative makes the book uninteresting (the laughter of the book cannot always be the interesting point). I kept skipping through several chapters and lost the desire to read further. It's a pity. It was very interesting to read at first. I originally thought it was a work that could be used to become a god. I think the protagonist can lead the queen to the ends of the world, fight monsters and upgrade along the way; or make suggestions, form forces, farm development, or go crazy in war. However, the system feels that there is no drama. The protagonist neither leaves the queen nor does anything, and is as pure as a bodyguard. . . There is only thinking about solving problems after encountering them (mostly relying on temporary cheats), and there is no thinking about becoming stronger or planning the plot or the future. The protagonist has no charm, the plot has no charm, and there is no fun, only laughter. The above are all personal opinions. As a reader (bookworm), I still hope that the author can write better and better, and that I can read more books.

So well written. The rhythm is well controlled, and the text reads without any translation accent or sluggishness. Moreover, some vulgar jokes/slangs/jokes will not make people feel uncomfortable when used, and they are even used brilliantly in some places (maybe the intensity can be controlled?). The character portrayal is also very good. Even the appearance is very different from those authors who pile up embarrassing rhetoric. The perspective of the portrayal is particularly original. The description of facial expressions (especially expressions) goes beyond the typical animation model created by ordinary online novels. In some places, it even feels like the characters are flowing naturally, which is beyond the ordinary text dimension and is very magical. However, some chapters feel like the pictures overlap when reading, and it is a bit confusing when switching scenes (it may also be because I read the book too quickly and missed some details). The title of the book is eye-catching, which will limit the audience to a certain extent. After all, the content is much better than the title of the book. Of course, the current results probably have little to do with this. As long as you keep writing down, there is a high probability that the orb will not become dusty. I won't talk about it anymore, it's so well written. Even if there are a few shortcomings listed above, they still outweigh the shortcomings. I even want to give the author money (but there is no such thing).

From now on, every time I go to the 100th floor, I will reveal something dirty about a fish

Thank you, the author, for letting me read this book. I really like this kind of feeling, it doesn't ruin the character, it's easy to complain, and you can do whatever you want in the future without going too far. It's a rare book. Unlike so many novels nowadays, which have a strong purpose, the surprises or astonishments in ordinary life are more pleasing to the eye. After all, novels are not literature on the market that allows people to master a certain skill. IMHO, the purpose is too strong and it is just a picture. I hope the author can use his own ideas. I have prostituted myself many times for nothing, as long as you don't change your original intention. If I dare to write, I will be determined and I will do what I say. Can you add some sperm PS: By the way, I almost forgot (5 cents a piece) haha ​​😄👍