Condor Shooting: Starting from Iron Palm Peak

I didn't even read the title of Huang Rong before. When I came in, I had dinner with Guo Jing. I met Huang Rong and asked Guo Jing to contact Huang Rong. Death from poison

Before writing a book, should you at least read the original work?

Qiu Qianren: Did Hong Qi scold him? Can you, a little brat, scold you?

This introduction is just a piece of shit. I'm already poisoned and dead just by reading the introduction.

This..., I can't beat you, you scolded me, I tolerated it, you are just an ant and you still scold me, then I would be sorry if I didn't make you proud. I have been practicing martial arts for so many years.

Forget about preaching to the elders! A junior is here to teach you. If you don't kick him out, you have a good temper.

You will know what this book is like after reading the introduction.

After reading the introduction, Hong Qigong said Qiu Qianren was ashamed. Is it possible that Qiu Qianren couldn't beat Hong Qigong and Yideng was watching from the side?

Come on, I want to see Jin Yong in Iron Palm Town

Can you choose a better protagonist? How can you bully a man and dominate a woman and then yell at the gang leader and still be alive and become a direct disciple? You are a bit too much.

There is no system, relying on words is of no use.

When writing a fanfic, you should at least study the original work. The chapter on Yijin Jinduo is in the first volume of Jiuyin Manual, not in the second volume. If the second volume had the chapter on Yijinduogu, would Mei Chaofeng still be paralyzed by practicing? Really speechless

Gee, what's the difference between liking to watch the protagonist pick up girls and the protagonist liking the characters in the book picking up girls? I really don't understand the so-called "bringing in the courage" in Stallion's article. In Lu's article, what kind of magical pleasure can your wife feel when she watches a single man hitting the sand?

Isn't it true that the fighting between left and right is the same as the double form of tiger and crane, the battle of life and death between eagle and snake, and Huang Yaoshi's Dongfeng stunt? It means that one person uses two sets of martial arts. When the supporting character fights the protagonist, he or she is weak. If the protagonist uses it, it becomes a peerless martial arts.

Are you trying to reason with Qiu Qianren, who kills without blinking an eye? Aren't you funny? What reason does the superior have to give for killing? Even if you are right, the faster you kill, how Tian Feng was killed by Yuan Shao in the Three Kingdoms should be because Tian Feng was right.

AI likes to add all kinds of useless adjectives

I find it difficult to scold Qiu Qianren for being able to wake up, as it does not fit the characteristics of the characters in the original work. I think the subsequent writing is okay, so why not write it again?

The writing is not bad, at least there is no first-rate or second-rate classification. Jin Yong's martial arts originally paid more attention to understanding, and the purity of internal energy needs time to be polished. But there is one thing that Wu Mu's suicide note can really be given to Wanyan Honglie. Temujin has grown big, and the Jin Kingdom cannot end so early. Giving him a copy of Wu Mu's suicide note can slow down the pace of Mongolia, find a way to wake up Guo Jing in advance, prevent him from conquering for Temujin, buy more time for the protagonist's power to develop, and give full play to the truly terrifying position of Jianghu people. If you directly engage in assassinations, you have the opportunity to directly kill Temujin and the top Mongolian leaders. A leaderless group will inevitably lead to civil strife in Mongolia. The protagonist can also start a new Mingjiao rebellion or become a martial arts supreme and order the martial arts masters to kill the high-ranking foreigners instead of letting them directly go to the battlefield.

The protagonist is really a saint. People like Mei Chaofeng, who kills innocent people indiscriminately, can't bear to let her die, so he risked his life to save her.

So far it looks very good. I hope the protagonist combines the memory of the past life and the Nine Yin Manual to develop the Nine Yang Magic by himself. The Nine Yang Magic plus Iron Palm is good

I originally wanted to read a modern martial arts novel, but after reading a circle of friends' comments, I found only ridicule and abuse. I guess the quality of this book is not very good, so I stopped reading it.

The beginning is a bit confusing, the main character's name is quite confusing, and even the names of other Xiaoxiami are not comparable to Wujue. There is no martial arts style at all, and it feels incompatible with martial arts novels. The content is very good, and it is a rare masterpiece among all martial arts fan novels. It is worth looking forward to.

Good looking, please read "Chen Shang Sword Journey"!

This novel is very strange. You can tell me that it is not good-looking. The writing is good, the plot is reasonable, the main and supporting characters all have above-average IQs, and all I can think of are basically good points. But the strange thing is that after thirty or forty chapters, I just have no desire to continue reading, because it seems that when I read each chapter, I can guess what the next chapter will say, and there are almost no surprises. Maybe this is the reason.