From Knight’s Squire to Lord of the Scarlet Crusade

The world view is a little too laid out. High-level professions appear too early, which leaves a sense of tearing. The protagonist is currently weak. It would be fine if any character appears one or two levels higher. But it is so much higher all at once, and the protagonist has no sense of involvement.

It was amazing at the beginning, but I took it for granted in the middle. I guess the author wanted to show off, but couldn't control it, so the food level was reduced by one level.

I feel that the currency system is a bit confusing, and those who reward peasants and soldiers are also ridiculously wealthy. It feels like the currency is worthless.

It's so well written. I thought it was World of Warcraft.

God, the classification of game aliens does not mean that you are really writing an online game novel. The precise numbers in a lot of skill descriptions in Chapter 5 are really interesting. The most abstract one is the 30% combat power. It really feels like phantom online game skills.

There are a lot of stitches in this world. The system looks so messy.

Surprisingly okay, just a little slow to warm up

The precise data of the skill mark seems a bit weird, and those who don't know it might think that the protagonist has an AI or is playing a game, which is quite surprising.

If you don't have a system, add a bookshelf 😁

What the hell, there's even a thermal weapon