If You Can Create a Fairy That Will Last Forever

The writing is pretty good, but I hope that the protagonist, who has been practicing for so many years, doesn't have the mentality of a child and should be calmer.

This introduction is so well written. The foundation can control all the spirits in the world. The Zi Mansion accepts the heaven and the earth as its home. The golden elixir cannot refine chaos into elixir?

If you die, what will we eat?

The settings are pretty good but a bit cumbersome and could be simplified appropriately.

What are you writing about? Is this teaching readers how to practice? The writing is so tedious, just like practice notes...😐😐😐

This is a good Goudaoliu seedling, good luck to the author! If you maintain this state, your results will get better and better! Monthly pass for you

Yes, I like this kind of food, but it's too little and not enough to eat.

Baka~baka~♡ Update soon~