This Dandy Tops the Imperial Exams Today

After reading a few chapters, the writing is fluent but the information density is too scattered. It seems that it is not intentional, but it may be due to lack of experience in writing novels. Your compressed storyline pays close attention to the pacing!

The author writes well, don't run away, there is a little bookworm waiting for you to update.

There is a ambiguity in what you said. It took me a long time to figure out what you meant was that the soul traveled to the Jiajing period... Rather than to the Emperor Jiajing 😅

Came here because of the name, I like the story very much

Coming from Jiangzuo, I originally wanted to curse a few words, but unexpectedly found that the author's writing is not bad. He can still survive without signing a contract for 800,000 words. Please give me some opinions. I hope it will be helpful. The pursuit of novels is nothing more than the pursuit of "telling a good story". The author can speak clearly and write fluently, which has killed half of the Internet literary world. Yes, this is worthy of recognition, but the creativity of the plot and setting is still lacking For historical texts, the plot should be "bigger", allowing the characters to be involved in major events, and giving a sufficiently grand and clear main line. Whether it is a battlefield or a temple, there must be a clear conflict between the civil and military sides, so that there is room for the characters to perform. The background of this book is set during the Jiajing period. The temples were nothing more than the sesame seeds and rotten millet affairs of the Jiajing cabinet. The external situation was not covered much, so the look and feel of this book was too scattered. To be honest, if I don't love historical articles, I think that since the author is not good at macro-level writing, he should use his strengths and avoid weaknesses to write something else. He can achieve results by changing the track Furthermore, the introduction is long and the chapters are not skillful enough. He is still too green in these aspects That's all, best wishes.

Persevere, you are just starting to work now, everything needs to be persevered, save this state, have more inspiration, more time, be patient, understand the platform, and sign up early.

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Why did the author publish so much without signing a contract? How did you persevere and write almost hundreds of thousands of words on a single machine?

No, you found shit, run quickly 😆

It looks good from the front, keep at it✊