Douluo Dalu: I Became a God of Magic by Starting with Martial Soul Removal

The protagonist can become a God of Emotions Because the magic in Harry Potter is based on the heart as the source of magic Using Avada Kedavra requires you to use it with great murderous intent, and the protective spell cast by the protagonist Harry's mother requires love to use And using the Invocation Guard requires you to think about happy things. In short, Harry Potter's magic is idealistic

6. You almost showed your underwear to others at the beginning. What is the difference between Shrek Academy's credibility and its lack of credibility? Do you really want to be the filial son and grandson of Tang Buddha?

I don't know why, it feels so deliberate

The setting is okay, but the plot feels like it would be better not to follow the rules and go to school step by step. Going to school in Shrek is really not as interesting as going to school in Hogwarts, and you wrote the evil of everyone in Shrek in such a specific way, while the protagonist goes to school calmly as if it has nothing to do with me, which creates a strong sense of separation and gives people a negative and depressing feeling that the evildoers are at large. For example, the plot of Zhang Lexuan kneeling outside Xuanzi's door is actually not necessary to be so specific. Just write vaguely that she looked bad when they met again and Xuanzi came out again. Zhang Lexuan's grievances are completely written out, and the protagonist can't do anything. It just feels like the protagonist has come to this world, and there is no difference from not coming. If the protagonist cannot change Shrek at this stage, then I think there is no need to write too much negative content that will make readers feel angry and aggrieved. Negative emotions come too early and positive feedback comes too late.

The inspiration is good but the plot pace is too slow.

Xuanzi's greed disappeared and four people died. Several others had no complaints against Xuanzi 🤔

The characters in this book are well written, similar to Wu, Ning, Ma, Yan, and Xuan, and they are very irritating to watch.

After entering V, the updates were really slow, and the plot was a bit watered down.

Single flow? It seems like no one wants to accept it.

Come on, this is also a rare good book among Douluo fans.