Devouring the Starry Sky: I, the New Master of Babata

This is my comment on QReader. I am too lazy to type.

If you travel through a time-travel novel and don't know the plot, isn't that what you're doing as an aborigine?

The protagonist is a time-traveler who has never read the original work and can be regarded as an indigenous person.

How can you accept Xu Xin in a while? How could Swallowing Starry Sky contain multiple female protagonists? If you don't like to see multiple female protagonists, just leave. It's written clearly in the character column, and some people are as if they are blind. It seems quite novel to me. After all, I have never seen a multi-female protagonist in Devouring the Starry Sky, and I feel that the plot arrangement and writing style are quite good. But the protagonist has not read "Swallowing the Stars", so I can't say that there is no problem at all. Most fan fiction will write about novels I read a few years ago and I can only remember the general direction, so it doesn't affect anything. After all, I really don't remember the details of "Swallowing the Stars". But I really shouldn't know anything, I don't know anything about stellar level, universe level, etc... In the plot, Xu Xin was sent to the protagonist by the Xu family, and the protagonist himself didn't snatch it from Luo Feng, so why can't he accept it? I love CP so much that I should read the original work several times. CP gangsters are the funniest thing in fan fiction, just like the people in Mingke fan fiction who make fun of Xinlan, and in Dou Po fan fiction where they make fun of Xiao Yan and those women. How can you rob someone with just one mouth? I've already read the fanfic and it's delivered to my door. Why don't you want it?

Let me tell you two things and you decide whether to watch it or not 1. The protagonist is a time traveler who has never read the original work, so he is more indigenous than aboriginal 2. Even Xu Xin will not let go of Luo Feng's opportunity As for the rest, such as the spiritual power that can be turned into a thousand-meter-high magic sky out of thin air, and the protagonist being a lustful stallion, not to mention that the female character who is somewhat famous in the original work has an unclear relationship with the protagonist, not to mention the magical modifications are more outrageous.

It can only be said to be rubbish among rubbish, First, the protagonist of this book is a time traveler, and the result is completely unknown, so what is the point of writing about time travel Second, this is a fanfic of the anime, and the anime is originally a magic modification, but the book is a magic modification within the magic modification Third, I don't know the original text system at all, just rely on search or AI, Fourth, it is long-winded, the first ten words of a picture are the plot, and then explain the picture For example, a certain Babata found The protagonist, it's just one sentence, and then I have to write a chapter to explain the invasion of his AI and surveillance Fifth, I wrote a lot of explanations and it's so wrong, you might as well stop talking and just write it down Sixth, harem story , this one is the most outrageous, the most outrageous thing is to stand up to Luo Feng's wife 🙂, The fact that a few novels are only level 4 already shows the situation. Novice can't write such a heaven-defying garbage novel, so if you don't understand, just write a fan novel, and you have to eat it if you don't have money?

Seeing as the author does not delete negative reviews and accepts criticism, now that we are in the book review area, why not just click and take a look. People have different tastes. Maybe, I mean maybe, maybe this book can be regarded as delicious dry food for you. Thank you

The time traveler doesn't know the plot or which world he is going to? Then why do you write fan fiction? Isn't it good to write an original world? Can't you create an original wasteland or strange world? Even if the time traveler in a fan novel cannot know the entire plot, he should still know which world he has entered and who the protagonist of the original novel is. Do you know some general plot? You don't know anything about this question. No wonder no one is watching.

Haven't you noticed that you are saying things over and over again that you have said countless times? As a multi-heroine, there are very few descriptions and interactions with the heroine. Every time I describe the heroine's interactions, I turn a page or two and suddenly find myself jumping to another scene. I was interacting with the heroine, but was immediately interrupted. I have no idea what I did or what I did.

😄 When I saw you being scolded by so many people, I thought who it was. I turned to your homepage and saw the book "Perfect World" and found out that it was the man who can water one million with two million. I don't know how much water will be poured into this new book.

In my opinion, it makes no difference whether this book is free or not. I haven't even finished reading the free chapters. I originally read the introduction and found out that he is one of the rare time travellers who steals the chance to be the protagonist. I wanted to see what it was like. After all, the protagonists of Tomato are all decent and have upright views, and time travelers are generally unwilling to steal their opportunities. In the end, you gave me a lightning strike. This is a time traveler who doesn't know the plot. Forget it, the way of thinking and behavior are not like those of a time traveler, so what is the difference between your setting as a time traveler and that of aboriginals? Even the whole book has a tendency to develop in the direction of national fortune writing. Then it's very nagging. I wrote the protagonist's thoughts over and over again several times, and I had to evaluate every character that appeared. I wrote several chapters in one meeting, but if I look closely, I didn't say a few words in total. The rest were all psychological activities. Also, the protagonist has a Baba Tower. He neither understands the subsequent cultivation issues nor the universe. Instead, he creates something like a space force. That's all I saw, even if you have a limited exemption, you don't plan to look back

Many readers are confused by the fact that the protagonist, as a time traveler, has not read the original work and does not have the advantage of knowing the plot in advance. But... The protagonist doesn't know it, the readers know it, and the author who wrote this book also knows it. The most important thing is. Who stipulates that time-travelers must have read the original work, know the plot, and have foresight to be a qualified time-traveler? Of course, this is not to teach readers to read the book, nor do they dare. I just hope that readers can listen to what the author has to say. What the author wants to say is very simple. Sometimes, being ignorant and knowing less is not a bad thing, or you should not know things in advance that are not in line with your current identity. In the author's personal opinion. If the protagonist had foresight from the beginning, he would either embrace Luo Feng's thigh, or stay away from the earth. But since we have chosen to start on Earth, and we don't want the protagonist to be useless and shamelessly try to please Luo Feng, we can only be ignorant, because the ignorant are fearless. As for Xu Xin. Anyone who has read my old book "Perfect" knows that no matter how great Xu Xin's karma is, he cannot take away all the confidants of Emperor Huangtian.

If you don't even look at any 💩 free ones, clicking on them is a waste of time

After reading Chapter 14, I really can't stand it anymore. The Stellar level actually requires understanding the rules to break through. I'm convinced. Can't those who write novels read the original work?

Well, that's what I saw coming in. God knows what you thought when you came in and saw that Babata was the heroine? Man-machine? Is this what you mean by respecting the original work? Where is the respect?

Xu Xin is robbing him? The author is really hungry!

Purely indigenous? That's really no memory at all 😅

Shit time traveler, you don't know anything, what kind of time travel do you write about?

If you look at this cover, you will know that it disrespects the original work. Babaka is a girl.

A very simple point, this is a fanfic. Travelers don't know the complete plot, but they should know a rough idea. Otherwise, it's just like the aboriginals, reading fan fiction and watching aboriginal performances. Then I might as well just go read the original work.

Are you planning to take Xu Xin in? ? It's a bit outrageous. The male protagonist is not the ungrateful protagonist next door, so it would be inappropriate for you to accept it.

Aboriginals in the skin of travelers

When I asked Doubao, he told me that it was purely written by AI.

Cut a tomato or create a world

Is there so much talk about cars and wheels in the first chapter?

I haven't read it yet, I just looked at the table of contents and asked, Chapter 200 has not reached the battle of geniuses yet, is there any more to read?

Why do they bind the five major countries to HR, thinking that they have more common interests, and want to confront Hong Lei? ? ? What about the other three Speakers?

I'm really convinced. I heard from 140 to 180. I thought that at least you would not return to Earth until the outcome of the battle between geniuses in the universe. It's obviously just a slap in the face, so why don't you do something to test the local people's character? What I want to see is a battle between geniuses and killing everyone, not an irrelevant nonsense you just give me here. It's really disgusting and makes people less likely to have any desire to top up money.

Author: After reading the first chapter of your introduction, I would like to say that you wouldn't think that you read traveler fanfic just because of the earth traveler, why are you familiar with the plot?

No, what are you writing about? The introduction says respect for the original work. Have you read the original work? Only by comprehending the rules at the stellar level can you break through. Even if you only watch anime, you know how powerful the genius station's comprehension rules are. What you wrote is a personal understanding. What a piece of shit.