All Heavens: Starting from the Spirit Cage

I have watched more than a hundred episodes of Mortal recently. I enjoyed it, but I can't hold it anymore. I want to write about mortals directly [I never thought about writing it] So there is a high probability that this book will [definitely] contain the mortal world. Zi Ling, Yuan Yao, Yinyue, Mu Peiling, Mrs. Wen... They all need the care and rescue of the protagonist. But the author is not happy alone. The author hopes that brothers will also enjoy reading it. If you guys have a favorite anime female character, you can say it directly below this book review, and the author will go and watch the anime again.

I don't know much about Super God. Does anyone who knows about it can tell me? Can't the resources of this solar system even create an ordinary angel? The combat power of the angels in this novel, Super God, is too strong. I have watched a few episodes of Super God, and the individual angels in it are so powerful! It seems that only those fourth-generation divine bodies can explode stars, and the solar system. If even one angel cannot be created, is it possible that all of these angels are third-generation divine bodies?

The suit is quite ugly. I don't know why the protagonist likes to wear it so much.

It's easy to collapse when writing about the heavens, especially fan fiction

It's a bit messy and makes me dizzy. The author's world view is okay, but don't use your abilities randomly (it will fail)! There are also some inexplicable things! In this case, you will not be able to write this book!

Let's have another perfect novel! Perfect has released many beauties recently!

I just discovered your new book. I hope I can take in everything I need and don't miss anything.

The Covering the Sky Trilogy, The Other Side of Deep Sky, The World of Immortality, The Lord of One Life, The Illustrated Book of Destiny, Eternal Life, Dragon Talisman, Holy King, Emperor of the Galaxy, Great Road Confrontation, Supreme Humanity, The God of Shepherd, Emperor's Honor, Prehistoric Calendar, Projection of the Heavens, Fantasy World Travel, Fairy Gourd, Shu Mountain

And I can tell from your introduction that the first copy is long and watery, no different from fan fiction.

The protagonist won't just use the twelve talismans until the finale, right?

I can't stand other novels after reading the beginning. Bro, just write a fanfic. There's no need to embarrass yourself.

All I can say is... The experience in the first three chapters was not good. I felt that the protagonist was a bit like a poor man who suddenly became rich.

I came here because of the reputation, but even an old lady like Bai Yuokui can eat it. I have to see it.

Let me go, you are all female supporting actors, and the smell of your profile is almost coming out.

The golden finger setting is very good 😏, but the plot progress is a bit slow 😏

The author is good at writing about Crystal Palace, and the route is well organized.

After reading five chapters, I felt that it was not suitable for me. She smelled a bit like a lower-body animal. When I saw a woman, I directly asked if she wanted to be my princess. And there is already an angel girl next to him who has made a vow with him

Zhu Xian can be used excessively in the mortal world, and cultivating immortals does not require spiritual roots.

The combined cultivation of Zhu Xian Tian Shu, Demon, Taoism and Buddha can be used as the basis for the integration of different types of exercises and provide an early source of ideas for the subsequent integration of cultivation systems in different worlds. The World of Immortality can be the easiest place to get the Immortal Emperor-level skills in the middle and late stages. Xiao Chen can use it back as a condition to get the cultivation skills. If done properly, he can get all the stone tablet skills directly from the phantom of the Dragon Island Sky Monument.

There are only one update on the shelves, so short and weak.

Damn, why don't you cut it off? I feel like the opening is a bit weird.

Author, come on, don't be a eunuch

What I said downstairs is more pertinent. There are some differences between writing a harem novel and not turning it into a stud novel. The author can change the method to see how the results are. It is best to accept female protagonists and supporting characters who are relatively popular or have some distinctive characters that can make people stand out. For example, Shui Yue and You Ji in Zhu Xian, and Hong Fu in Mortal. In the books, they are all stunning figures from the previous generation, but not only are there few appendices in the books, but they are also not very eye-catching in the anime. There is a book that mentions that when a stunning beauty encounters misfortune, she is like a meteor streaking across the dark beauty, but it cannot stand in the heart for long. The same "previous generation" beauty anime Zhuxian Nine-Tailed Novice has successfully distinguished herself from the beauties of the older generation.

After reading the last chapter, author, can't you really see why you feel so cold? I'm still pretending not to know. Apart from explanations, ability annotations, and narration, what other nutrients does a chapter have? Let me tell you something more straightforward. Such as getting up today and going to work. You start with a sentence about getting up from the bed and then talk about how the bed is made of top-grade golden nanmu and half water. Then you make a breakfast and explain the ingredients in a narration. How high-end the tableware is. One chapter was finished by you. Do you think this kind of Baidu novel can achieve good results? There is no progress in various plots, and it can be seen at a glance that there is no outline or main line. I just write a word and then give a lot of comments to the word.