In America, My Cousin Supergirl Kara

To be honest, what you wrote was a bit disgusting (~_~;) Especially the part about standing on the street with maggots in your belly button, taking them out and putting them in your mouth to eat as melon seeds. How did you come up with it? Little genius

This protagonist has the word "reckless" all over him, and he is completely mindless and would have turned into a corpse if he hadn't cheated on the opening chapter 5. Moreover, some chapters look inconsistent. Could it be that something has been deleted or changed?

I was told that the chicken taste was too strong 😐, so I went looking for it again.

Write about America well. The beginning should be about parents offering sacrifices to heaven. I didn't want to read it even after I wrote it. I felt like a god. There were two giant Buddhas on my head. It was awkward to write. Isn't it fun that Great America is not loyal enough? It's easy to explode when writing about China. It's not unreasonable for an orphan to become a popular person, just copy the template.

The protagonist should have all the superhuman abilities from the beginning, but they all need to be added. Only giving him super hearing and then giving him a biological force field is too little. It doesn't look like Superman at all.

The protagonist is indeed a bit of a slut. He was discovered long ago without Saratoga. Although there was nothing wrong with him after he was discovered, the protagonist: My super wisdom tells me to use super strength. It is the courage brought by superhuman abilities. Even the low-end version is still superman.

There are so many Warhammer elements from Cult Mechanicus, Nurgle Soup, and Lair of Joy, and there are five or six women appearing in just over 200,000 words. Do you want the entire female Emperor to become a harem next? Answer me!

The writing is quite good, and the equipment and abilities given to teammates later are completely different from Don Quixote. Write your own thoughts, it doesn't have to be an American novel to lick the goose

Come on, author, please update more. I will give you all the monthly votes. Write more erotic articles. I voted for 19 monthly votes.

It's one notch lower than the best, so it's just food. It would be great if the author's writing style could be improved to a higher level.

It's better to play the role of a native of the motherland. Write more and love to read

Bizarro was promised, why did another succubus come? So depressing?

Let's have a threesome, the review started at nine o'clock and it hasn't been released yet😅

The writing is not detailed enough, many of the movements are too dramatic, and many words in the novel seem to have been deleted.

Write more plots about the people of the motherland. If you like to watch them, let the Black Robe crew change the plot of the Battle of the White House.

How come I see you in the daily guide every day?

By the way, can we add a raven as the heroine? I feel like there aren't many American comic book heroines with raven characters.

He has been released from prison, but there are two versions of classroom emergencies😵

Please update it quickly. That's it. It's not enough for anyone to read.

The main world is pretty good, don't write Zhutianliu, it will collapse

A copy of Don Quixote was pretty good, I hope this one will be interesting too

American comic: Time travels back to Soldier Man, and saves the people of the motherland at the beginning. The story takes place in the finale of Black Robe, when the people of the motherland are about to be headshot, and maintains the character of Soldier Man's Thunder Quotes and Drinking Old Wine.

Well written😍

I just saw 155. I planned to watch it again at night, but it was gone when I opened it tonight.

There are so many typos that I won't go into detail, and a chapter is missing.

That's it, I watched the latest Supergirl today. Now when I read the novel, what comes to my mind is that 😥

Lisa won't show up later?

There are too many typos, I hope the author will correct them