His Holiness the Pope Is Dead

Roosevelt's life was much more exciting than this

It's strange. I've read dozens of chapters, but I still don't understand that the protagonist asked so many people to take pictures, but he was still killed. Why? Why volunteer to die?

I can't tell anything about this introduction...

Is this meant to be about a saint? It feels quite difficult 😰

Author: I have seen a similar one removed from the shelves before. Was that one written by you?

The author generally writes social reform novels that are not as literary and fresh as yours. As long as social reform novels are literary and fresh, they will inevitably die violently. Remember that sentence, revolution is not a dinner party, it is about killing people.

The pace of the article is slow and there are too many unnecessary redundant and cumbersome descriptions in the writing. It can be seen that the author tried to depict the background of the times through the stories of many characters, but many things were too cumbersome. For example, the "memory killing" of gangster Eddie is not very well inserted. If it really needs to be written, Eddie can be arranged to collect protection money from door to door and write detailed memories on the way. After that, it is Lyudmila's turn to briefly recall after death, and Eddie expresses his confession. The Little Match Girl is also very lengthy. Of course, it would be a waste to write this story in just a few sentences, but this arrangement is not very good either. For such a long plot, it is not very good to use "Grace saw a case with her own eyes...". This can be used in a short case of a few sentences, but when used in so many paragraphs, it feels like "I will talk about it for two more minutes... (Long story)". My personal idea is to move the first few sentences of that chapter to the previous chapter. This chapter can start with a brief summary of the characteristics of the times, and then without descending to Grace's perspective, it can be "Grace once saw..." (The subsequent description does not necessarily reflect Grace's personal feelings. This is considered It uses a relatively cold writing style to summarize the era from one point, so the description is a little more refined than the current one. What I write now feels a bit too much nonsense. One sentence has to be divided into several sentences, resulting in a lack of depressive atmosphere. The suggestion here is to reduce Grace's perspective). I understand that the author wants to highlight Grace's purity and innocence, but it seems to be sacrificing the plot here. There are also some general and unnecessary argumentative contents that can be removed. Most of them can be easily understood and realized by readers. It feels like nonsense to point them out at this time (I forgot where the specific examples are. I will add them if I read them later). Overall, I think it is a very good book with a good concept, but the good content also makes some detailed problems obvious. The above are some of my current opinions. I feel that it cannot even be used as suggestions, because I always feel that this can only be regarded as my personal preference and has no universality. If I really want to say it, I would probably find a book whose story and concept are very suitable for me, and then try to make this book more suitable for me (´--`;)

Although it will never be the slaves who overthrow slavery, I still hope that most of the nobles die, including that princess. No matter how she does evil or atones for her sins, she will die in the end. What do you think, author?

The writing is excellent, I hope you can really write a saint. But it's better to add as little key politics as possible. I'm really afraid that I'll be pinched before I finish writing.

There is a feeling of being cut ()

The author's group portrait is good, but the results are not good Essentially, all novels are invincible texts. Everyone has cheats, so aren't they still invincible? I suggest you take a look at the best invincible writing method in my mind, "The One Who Knows All Information" Start. The protagonist of The Information Omniscient is omniscient and omnipotent The results are also very good. How was that book solved? It's simple, because it's too difficult, combined with the overwhelming combat power and character arc growth That book is also a saint, and it changes the entire universe without killing anyone. As well as the ability to suppress combat, at the beginning of the author, the Pope was resurrected after death, and that power can also return to its original state. In fact, it is not at its peak state. The protagonist has made a great wish, which is to liberate everyone. Then the 2nd Pope actually means nothing. Need to find a new path. What about getting the world back? No, it's still reincarnation.

Tomorrow is Tuesday, the recommended time for PK, and I ask everyone to contribute a follow-up reading

Cut? No update for so many days

I think the writing is pretty good, I can read it when I have free time (*´ｽv)

The protagonist is very close to the person who wants to kill him and has no resistance. The other person is not a good person worthy of sacrifice, he is just a princess who wants to continue to exploit the people.

Create characters, express tendencies, and incorporate allusions while stabilizing the sad and solemn style of writing.

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Can you please not put too many words enclosed in [square brackets], which will affect the coherence of reading. If it doesn't work, you can just replace it with half-width []. It feels like you are forcing settings into people's minds.

Introduction to the novel I wrote: I escaped from death, but was imprisoned in the forest by the woman who rescued me. She is the only survivor of the rumored brave team that has been wiped out long ago. She is a brave warrior who has killed countless monsters. She saved my life, but she didn't allow me to leave the hut even half a step; she took care of me tenderly, but when I tried to escape, her eyes were as cold as ice. "This time, don't think about escaping again." I thought she was being imprisoned, but as we got along day after day, I saw clearly her fragility and tenderness hidden under her paranoia. The follow-up high-energy plot and famous yandere scenes will be arranged soon!

I have read another novel with a similar theme, in which a socialist successor became the pope and planned to change the world, but was killed by his henchmen and then resurrected. The language of this book is a bit weird. It is obviously set in a Western medieval fantasy setting, but in order to highlight the greatness of the protagonist, a lot of Eastern poetry has been included.

The author's story at the beginning is so good, why can't it attract so many people to read it? It's not because the introduction is too mysterious. I didn't write down the explosive points directly. 😤 It is recommended to change it to make it more attractive. From the current synopsis, all I know is that the main character dies. It is recommended to change it to the situation where the protagonist loses his armor. Is that person actually the greatest pope before? Write the climax of the full text into the introduction to attract people to read. In this way, people can also expect the protagonist to lose his armor and make people read on. However, if the author has other ideas, he can change it, but the current introduction is still too bad.