Peninsula: It Began with the Nation's First Love's White Moonlight

I would like to give you a suggestion, 3 female protagonists would be fine. The current ones are Suzy, Sheep and Ouch. If there are too many female protagonists, it will easily collapse. You don't need to have too many female protagonists. Focus your limited writing power and energy on a few characters. This will make it easier to write and the story will be better. If there are too many female protagonists, it will easily become chaotic and collapse.

Looking at the second generation's stage now, I feel that the sixth generation is really not that interesting. Girls' Generation is still amazing, the stage charm is too strong, and they still have the ability. Lin Yoona is still active now

The writing is beautiful. There are so many ideas nowadays. There is no novelty in writing something normal. The writing is smooth and the plot is non-toxic. Korean entertainment is such a niche subject. There are so few people watching Korean entertainment, so I don't encourage it

The male protagonist is very awkward. He has just made a decision but then he changes his mind. He is always being led to do things without having his own opinion. He blushes frequently and feels guilty and is not honest. It is a bit awkward for the man and woman to pull the Shura field in many ways for the sake of the plot. I hope that the writing will be better and better in the future.

Already subscribed. I like Suzy very much. I hope to write more about Suzy and have a good ending in this book.

Suzy

Captain Imp

How about a heroine with a better figure balances it out 😥

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