Flower of the Other Shore: Age of Annihilation

It took me a long time to realize that there are multiple protagonists, but to be honest, the plot content does have scientific basis, but I still suggest that the author can reduce some content as much as possible. Readers do not have to be highly educated, and they are not willing to explore seriously, as long as the story is interesting, so I suggest that you modify it in this direction.

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I feel like you have a strong reserve of knowledge and your scientific settings are written very solidly. But as an online article, there are a few places that could be adjusted. Let me share my personal opinions: 1. The amount of information in the opening chapter is too much Kuafu No. 7, Picosecond resolution, violation of fluid mechanics... These terms are piled together, and it is a bit difficult for me to read. Readers of online articles may want to know "what happened" rather than "how it happened." Can we put these scientific details later and let readers enter the plot first? 2. The protagonist appears too late After reading the first chapter, I still don't know who the protagonist is. Is Fu Qinhe the protagonist? Or someone who will appear later? Readers of online novels are accustomed to following the protagonist. The earlier the protagonist appears, the faster readers will become involved. 3. "Multiple protagonists" are not friendly to newcomers My own experience is that readers can easily lose track when switching perspectives between multiple protagonists, while a single protagonist is more likely to keep reading. Is it possible to consider focusing on one person first, and then expand upon it when you have a firm footing? My book also has a problem of starting too slowly, and I am correcting it. The above is just my personal opinion, not necessarily correct, for reference only.

Brother, give me one more chapter. I'm tossing and turning now and can't sleep. Brother, I beg you. Please give me one more chapter. I'm dying. Please, I feel like there are ants crawling on me. I feel like I'm shaking all over. I'm dying. I can breathe, please. Brother, just give me one more chapter. Just one more chapter. I won't touch it again. Please, brother, it's really just one chapter. I swear I will never touch this thing again. I really can't bear it anymore. Brother, I beg you.