I Just Want to Live Forever

A group of powerful qi practitioners were struggling to survive in a small mud pond. For those who have perfected their qi training, there is really no need to earn anything unless they have the opportunity to build a foundation.

It's a very classical fairy tale. The writing style actually feels similar to that of a general manager. It should be the reincarnation of a great god. Anyway, the writing style is very smooth, and it is also very consistent with the classical fairy tale. It has a little fairy spirit and a little bit of literary youth, but it is relatively comfortable and not so abrupt. The structure and the rhythm are relative. Because it is a classical fairy tale, the rhythm may be a little slower than others, but there is nothing else.

It can be said that it is one of the top immortal cultivation articles from Qidian in recent times.

It is a very good novel about cultivating immortals seeking immortality. All the members have online IQs. There is a treasure gourd that can be used as a plug-in. The story is strong, the world view is complete, the emotions of the characters are well grasped, and the ups and downs are moderate. I have read Chapter 38 so far, and everything is good. I highly recommend watching it. I hope to add some reading, favorites, recommendations, and encouragement to the author.

It's not too unexpected. Although it looks good, I now understand that there is a problem with the pacing. The things the protagonist comes into contact with are always at a higher level than him. He practices Qi to seek Taoism. In the early stage of Taoism, he plots in the middle and late stages. He is exhausted and has no peace. This plot structure requires too high writing standards and lacks relaxation in the middle. Chong, that is, lack of space for hydrology, it is impossible to write a lot at once, but the online article is in a daily update mode, which is impossible without watershed. What is more fatal is the flaw in the basic settings. Some values are too exaggerated, such as the golden elixir that is one hundred thousand years (although it was later changed to ten thousand years), the middle The analysis is not perfect. Even if it can reach the middle stage in three hundred years, it directly exceeds the life span set by Dao Ji. The setting is thrown out but the end cannot be seen. Generally speaking, novels only encounter such a stuck point in the middle stage or even the later stage, but this one hit it right after leaving Novice Village... By the way, I express my condolences. Let's take a look at Guzhenren. The rhythm of this book is a bit similar to that one, but it's done better. It's more tense and the world view unfolds slowly but slowly. The flaws in the setting are relatively small (after all, it contains a huge amount of "tributes"). In the middle period, I tried my best to keep up with the plot, and finally I didn't escape the fate of the eunuch.

The author doesn't code and walks around the West Lake with a woman in his arms

I feel like this book is about watching chess, and I love writing about old men. The title of the book, and the character of the protagonist are almost exactly the same. It's so flavorful.

The first three chapters reflect the fairy flavor and writing power. If you maintain this quality, it will be a fine product.

From the current point of view, Xiancao is fine, but the updates are too slow.

I won't rush you, and I won't support you either, just don't be in a hurry.

The author probably got the inspiration after watching the recently popular TV series Five Dynasties and Ten Kingdoms. I feel that the protagonist is positioned like Feng Dao.

This book is indeed excellent. I have been reading novels for 18 years. I like it. You can click on my homepage to see the registration time. I have been reading novels before I registered an account.

The introduction says that there have been five prison guards in one hundred and fifty years, so is Qinghe the first or the second now.

This is the first life, there is no reincarnation from ancient times. Author, hold on, don't do too many cheats. Let him become an immortal in the first life.

Golden Chapter Three already has the qualifications of a great god

The writing is okay, the updates are stable, and if the volume is sufficient, the top three may not be interesting, but the top ten should be stable.

Maybe the author will succeed if he persists a little longer. He was too eager for quick success and fell before dawn.

It's very uncomfortable, really 😢

It's really well written, but it's a pity that it's a eunuch, alas

To be honest, it's really good. I just saw the paid chapter and suddenly it told me about eunuchs. Alas

You shouldn't tire yourself out without saving the manuscript. Save some and publish a book next time. The shelves will continue to get more updates🤤

Following you author, looking forward to the next book

If it is well written, it is possible for a book to become a god, but Daoji is a bit unwritten. Many book friends are looking forward to the protagonist's creation of the Heavenly Way. Unfortunately not. If you trap the protagonist in the spiritual cave of Baiyun District, how can you open the map? The protagonist can't go out. How to protect yourself once you get out of the spiritual cave? You wrote that foundation building is so difficult, how can you get it back? There are so many restrictions, so humane foundation building is a bit nonsense. How can I get the circle back if I add the spiritual point? Your idea of ​​building a Tiandao foundation and leaving Song State to go to other maps is a very good idea. It feels like you've trapped yourself to death by being complicated and complicated, and you've also written yourself to death. .