The Devil Comes to the World

The author is very good at setting up characters With almost no special description, he established the protagonist, King Juan, who is realistic, good at social interaction and has strong adaptability Especially the feature of reality is not the reality of the protagonist White-Eyed Wolf It is that the protagonist is extremely adaptable and is completely unique before the emergence of extraordinary elements. A materialist, when he met a classmate who was wrong and suspected of being crazy, he responded perfectly according to the way his brain dealt with neurosis Although he was assassinated for the first time, a considerable part of the reason was that the protagonist was only guarding against an "emotionally unstable adult male in the real world." Judging from the subsequent response, it can also be seen I found that the protagonist did not relax, but his thinking fell into inertia The characters of the classmates are also very good, with hesitation, struggle, and just the right blank space and pauses, echoing the "I" who fell into a time loop in the first chapter and started looking for excitement and then went crazy, that is, a certain time looper I can actually be a substitute for my classmates. Judging from the author's description of the expressions and behaviors of his classmates, I think the author probably also has depression or bipolar experience, so from my perspective, the protagonist's emotional intelligence is very high He can really comfort people who are out of control, and at the same time, it can really stimulate time loopers who are "emotionally out of control". Post some early climaxes to attract newcomers The protagonist seems to be innocently empathizing with his classmates. When the other party asks the protagonist whether he will call the police, he pretends that he has no reaction and has the option of "calling the police". In fact, he calls the police when he goes out After knowing that he cannot comfort the other party, he chooses to self-destruct and confess part of his pregnancy. Trust others The most important thing is that the characters, plot, and completion of this work are very high. I can call this work a player flow. After a lot of works, I have seen the most consistent work with the name of wits But it is not deliberate at all, and does not subjectively label and describe a certain character in the text Xiancao

After reading the first major plot, the beginning is amazing and the ending is not bad, but the middle is obviously a mess and the sense of dissonance is too strong...

I think the author can focus on writing imagination, such as dividing each weird event into unit dramas, and then letting the story connect the unit dramas. I started watching supernatural in 18 years. Really, once this national institution appeared, coupled with the attitude towards the male protagonist, I knew how the plot would develop with my eyes closed. This setting can be deleted completely. You can say to make a deal with the male protagonist to delay the use of reincarnation ghosts, and let the male protagonist help them do things, but you cannot let the male protagonist join. There is a saying that the plot is too cliche.

The plot advancement is okay, but the setting of ghosts always feels a bit sloppy. Maybe it's because the plot and some other settings haven't been developed yet. I'm waiting and watching. At the moment, I'm generally giving it to myself.

What the hell is this? Writing from the perspective of "I". I read the reviews and they said it was well written. This is a big flaw. This book is destined to not go far.

The writing is very good. I have a suggestion for the author. When you write about ghosts, write mainly about ghosts. Don't deal with those plots about human infighting and the masterminds behind the scenes, which will make people's blood pressure high. At present, both ghosts have the shadow of suspected human masterminds, which is very popular.

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If you don't read a word, you will definitely be criticized. Is it really reasonable to label such a powerful ability like death retrospection as unsystematic?

The beginning is quite amazing, although there are hints of a mysterious revival, and the subsequent plot is quite satisfactory.

The first chapter is great, don't drive high and go low

The author is Yao Ba Shan, right? ? Changed your vest again? ? Do you write a few chapters each time and then stop updating? ?

It's so well written, I feel like I'm back when I was watching Mysterious Resurrection. Come on, author.

Bro, which editor signed it, also has some ideas about supernatural beings.

This book is so interestingly written. I am also writing folklore adventure articles with the same theme. The style is similar and I am slowly polishing it and updating it~

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

The beginning is great, why don't you update it?

Why is it gone? Is it because we are not allowed to write about supernatural beings?

So far it's worth watching, I hope there will be some new settings in the future

The protagonist is not a Virgin, just a normal person, a high-IQ type imitating the setting of "Mysterious Resurrection". It is relatively green in some details, but the overall look and feel is very good. I don't see any poisonous points so far. Some problems will take a long time to be revealed. This is only a few chapters, so there is no need to be harsh. I will continue to read it. Good luck to the author. Another thing to mention, no matter what happens to the protagonist, try to highlight the official justice and never make mistakes that shouldn't be made.