Emberlight

I just like this kind of thing. Who would still hold court after traveling through time? I want to see laser cannons beating primitive people.

The group-portrait-like writing style is good, but it somewhat distracts from the portrayal of the pig's trotters. In addition, it is better to expand the inner feelings and interactions of the pig's trotters. The golden fingers and feelings of the time traveler are not only about making steel and cannons, but also in daily life, not necessarily inventions and politics. It would be better to have more collisions and exchanges. In addition, there should be some changes in historical figures and new roles.

Xu Guangqi is a public intellectual and his crimes are extremely heinous.

Several countries regressed into feudal civilization, and their thousands of years of history have repeatedly proven that technology, population advantages, resources, culture, and strong men descended from the sky... Nothing can save the feudal dynasty.

Is this to witness the rise of Li Zicheng? Come on, the historical track is not easy.

1. Before it is put on the shelves, the update time should be during the day or after get off work. 2. You can write more about the development process and less about topics that are easy to cause controversy. After all, some people are not normal. 3. The development of some technologies should be consistent with the actual situation. Don't overdo it. 4. Write more stories about the people at the bottom to have a sense of substitution and write some people's historical views. 5. The priorities of the characters should be clearly distinguished. Write more storylines about the main characters. Some supporting characters and characters that cannot promote the plot can be mentioned in one stroke.

The author was a bit slow in writing, so Li Zicheng, who bought a set from Mr. Yao Xueyin, read it first 🤓

It's best for pig's feet to have some performance in martial arts.

Rt. This is a warm book post.

So publicity is still useful~~