1987: Smoke Rising from the Mountains and Seas
1987：山海炊烟
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- Urban
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- Urban Life
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I got the shot of the clouds I've always wanted to take.
There are so many little surprises today, and I also wish all of you parents of food and clothing, may life be wonderful everywhere.
The comments after each chapter are gone. I can't even see the ones I posted myself. I'm convinced.
Yesterday I took a time-lapse of the blue sky, white clouds and lilies in Qingdao
Isn't it cool?
Some words are often repeated before and after, and the tone is a bit harsh.
The heroine, Shen Jing
The heroine generated using beanbags feels good
To be honest, it would be more interesting to write less about emotional scenes and more about the business and relationships in the store. I skipped the emotional scenes.
Let me share with you the time-lapse of gardenia flowers I took yesterday.
I bought it for more than a month and thought it would not open
I just read two chapters. My aunt married from Jiaozhou to Laoshan in 1994. When I was a kid, I went to Mount Laoshan. The road took eighteen turns and I fainted, but not many tourists. There is even less possibility of a farmhouse restaurant. The car can't get in. Talking about tourism in the 1980s and 1990s was sheer nonsense. Laoshan was so poor at that time that even shopping in the mountains was so tiring.
When writing this kind of daily writing, the author must first learn to delete. When the author of this kind of writing writes a piece of content that he is familiar with, he has a lot of ideas in his mind. He wants to write it all out, with many details and full content, but when written out in full, it seems long-winded and procrastinating. The author writes Sometimes I don't think that I can write smoothly, and I may even think that this is a very good paragraph that I have written. However, readers will not like it. They feel that it has nothing to say, and a lot of ink is wasted on just a small thing. It is suspected of filling the number of words. If there are a few extra chapters, some readers will stop reading. The best way is that after the author has finished writing, don't rush to upload it, wait a few hours to let his mind calm down, and then the author reads the manuscript himself, preferably reading it aloud. In this way, when his mind is calm and he has to work hard to read it aloud, the author can feel whether ordinary readers are tired of reading this new writing, and whether they find it too verbose.
The subject matter is good
But it's just that your relationship writing is too long and too early. Emotional scenes can be written interspersed with meals and daily life.