Descartes in the Causal Loop

Why is the update intermittent? Don't you plan to keep updating?

The B City chapter is coming to an end soon and will be completed on Sunday.

Such a niche subject, who signed it?

It's very difficult to write this kind of time travel novel well. Come on, author. You can read more comics of related types and get the settings right.

What should I say? I feel like it was written with great care. I hope I can revise it at the beginning if I have time. Muzi is definitely very special for the main perspective. The words describing her are basically emotional, but this foursome is really a bit abstract. Murakami Muraki wrote that the foursome is two men and two women, and this is three men and one woman. . . It's not unacceptable But the beginning is a bit too confusing. It feels like the person you are attracted to makes two better male friends and then ends up with a fiancé, and then the main point of view is always thinking about her. It would be more acceptable if you explain that several people are good friends when they were teenagers.

The seedlings are still available. It will be better if they are updated soon.

There are a few more big exams next week, so no more updates. Make up Friday night.

Do you feel like there are too many plots describing Muzi? Uncertain

The science fiction setting is very good, but the relationship between the characters is a bit confusing. Let's talk more with the editor.

I only read the beginning and only reviewed the first few chapters. 🎭 Character design: Except for the heroine, I don't have much impression, especially Gu, who is even a bit of a tool. ✒️Writing: Not bad, but sometimes I feel like I don't know when something will pop up even when I read it fast. From the beginning of the plot, the information becomes dense all of a sudden, which is not easy to absorb. In addition, it feels like quantum entanglement, wormholes, and cause and effect are all mixed together. I don't understand what it is about at all, and I personally don't like it. The style is not an orthodox online writing style, but more like a published novel style, but it is a rare suspenseful science fiction style, with a bit of the feel of Winter Reappearance and City and Cicada. If you like this style, you can try it.

Sorry, I have to take two exams next week, and I have to review hard on the weekend (I am afraid of failing the exam ʢ˶ᵒ ᵕ ˂˶ʡᶻ). It may not be too much. I hope everyone can understand. I will finish up the chapters I owe in the past few days on Wednesday night. (ᴗˬᴗ*)