Lord of Both Worlds, Have You Opened up Magic?

The subject matter is good, but the author's writing is very messy, and the modern characters feel very crazy. The dialogue is like another person in the comment area said, and the writing is very messy 😠

The punctuation marks just look awkward What a person says is divided into several paragraphs, and in online articles, each paragraph has double quotes, such as: "Haha, I have an idea——" "Sell this bottle of potion, and then buy a slave." Of course, the above is a common use of punctuation in Internet articles, and the strict way to use it is: "Haha, I have an idea—— "Sell this bottle of potion, and then buy a slave. " But several paragraphs in your novel only use a pair of double quotation marks, which looks awkward. In the middle part, it is impossible to distinguish between dialogue and non-dialogue.

Indeed, the writing is poor, but it is readable. Half grain. .

The subject matter is good, but the content needs to be polished. It looks a bit too rough now.

I took a bottle of strength potion and immediately went to the gym to show off.

The protagonist gives people a childish feeling, loves to express himself, and cares about other people's opinions. The protagonist has no opinion of his own

Does anyone in crt328 inspect the car?

An excellent grain and grass article😁

Chapter 85 is the finale, I will delete it and not read it.

Oh ho, are you starting to throw away your manuscripts and prepare to run away?

Damn it. Why did it end so suddenly? What kind of eunuch is this?

To be honest, there is quite a market for double-wearing articles. It's rare to write well, and it tests your writing skills. The author really might as well write about time travel to fairy tales, fantasy, or historical backgrounds. The information is easy to check, and you don't have to think about setting levels or anything like that. As long as you feel cool enough to have a meal, it's fine.

The protagonist at the beginning is just like the protagonist in Xiaobai novels twenty years ago, and the plot characters are no different from NPCs. Throughout the plot, no character has a brain. . . It's too watery, it's all dull NPC templates from stand-alone games.

It's a eunuch! Lift the next one out!