Traveling Through Thousands of Realms at the Same Time, I Need to Add Some Dark Blue

It feels like the author has completely fallen into self-indulgence. No matter what the original work is, he has already changed it towards his own original work. So why not just open an original book?

Some people may not like Dian Lao Wen. It doesn't matter. It's just that they don't read enough Zhutianwen. When you read more, you will find that Dian Lao Wen is fun. Because there are a lot of people writing about Zhutianliu Bar now, and there are only a few routines that go back and forth. I feel like my scalp is numb when I see it. It's really not as good as Bianlao's writing, kill it, kill it, finish reading it and feel happy, whatever.

The biggest problems with this book are that one is that he goes crazy for no apparent reason, and the other is that each world gives the protagonist a new setting, and makes a lot of strange plug-in settings. As a result, he only writes a few chapters before moving on to another world. Overall, it is very messy.

I just read the summary written by the author. Let me put it this way, regarding the mixed martial arts author, you are really too hasty in writing. You have written so much, different worldviews are set up, and they are all written together, and they are also crazy like Hong Kong comics and martial arts. If you separate them, it is no problem, but if they are combined, there will be a problem. You can focus on the metal system first, mix in a small part of the worldview, and then return to the space to share it as a temporary The small ending is a shared upgrade for several others, interspersed with some other previous or new worlds, and then mainly based on the world view of the Yellow or Fengyun series, and then improves the protagonist, or directly adds a new Hong Kong comic martial arts newcomer to the space. The main purpose of writing this is to reduce the sense of fragmentation among readers. To be honest, the sense of fragmentation in mixed martial arts writing is too strong. When Feng Chaohuang wrote Naruto, a large number of people had opinions, but he was not like You write it all at once until the end, instead of writing part of it with one event at a time and then ending it temporarily, and then writing part of it in other worlds at intervals. What you are writing now gives me the feeling that many exciting parts that can be written have not been written, and the sense of fragmentation is too strong. There are some problems in stitching together the worldview. It looks like the protagonist has gone crazy for no reason, and the protagonist seems to be a different person. It is probably for both those who like martial arts and those who don't. It's not flattering. Even if I'm right with the brainwave, I will feel that you wrote it too fast. It's inexplicable that you wrote from a low-level martial arts world to a cosmic-level battle. You can completely open another Hong Kong comic martial arts world view, and you don't need to squeeze everything into this mixed martial arts world. Or you can end it temporarily, and then use other new world views to improve it, and then return to the mixed martial arts world to do a wave of upgrades, so that there is no such strong sense of separation.

Mortals can develop their Five Elements Spiritual Roots. After all, the Five Elements are all things. When attacking, you can get a five-color divine light. Anyway, it can be quite useful.

Isn't it true that in every world, the strength increases rapidly and then each one becomes more and more perverted? 😅 They all write a chicken-feather clone, Liu Liu, in a silly way?

I originally thought I would give it a free update,,, It's so mysterious and confusing, I really can't stand it In the previous volume, all the worlds are broken, not a single one of them is broken I can't read ten lines at a time, and I'm going to feel numb after reading each line carefully Watch it if you like it, I originally wanted to endure it and watch the super-magic mechanic in the back, but the author succeeded in making me hate the world I want to see, and I don't want to see the world I haven't seen, lol:-D

Magic can be changed, but there are too many plots involving madness and defeat. I don't know if the author is too high-spirited in writing and is always arrogant. It feels strange to see Zhu Xian chapter changed to defeat.

My best friend has really risen to the top, and the following chapters of Zongwu always feel like the author has been replaced, and the messy writing is all about self-pleasure.

The characteristics of the clone flow are full level at the beginning, one world is written in one way, only the climax is written, and the world is changed after writing. Now the protagonist is just being crazy and has no special features. A crazy world is enough, now everything is crazy 😭

Author, your protagonists go crazy inexplicably in each world. Are you sure that the protagonist in a certain world is not contaminated, causing all the protagonists to be contaminated at the same time?

I was originally looking forward to the mystery part, but in the end so many settings were added! Completely lost interest!

I have always felt that the name Tianlongren is the abbreviation of the Dragon Kingdom people in the Celestial Kingdom. That's why I haven't watched One Piece.

I think the author's fast-paced outline writing style suits my taste. If a world is too long, I won't have the patience to read it. Furthermore, those who like to watch mixed martial arts doujins may not necessarily like to read Naruto doujins, and those who like to watch Naruto doujins may not necessarily like to read urban doujins. The fan fiction audience for novels like The Lord of the World is even smaller. If a single world is too long, readers will easily run away.

It's an old problem. A little restraint is acceptable and everyone can accept it. Too many magic changes and too many changes are also problems. Author, can you restrain yourself?

It's not the problem that you are crazy about martial arts. The problem is that you suddenly have a buggy setting in the later stage. In the later stage, it feels like forcibly upgrading the opponent to end the game, and the protagonist's resurrection in the end is too hasty. It is a temporary added setting. It is very taboo to write novels. I don't say this, but it is a deus ex machina setting.

The author's writing is very good, but I'm a little tired of watching modern times travel through ancient times. Can the author create a genre in which an ordinary high school student in the 22nd century travels to a parallel time and space and becomes an equally ordinary high school student in the modern era? Because I came across a video today that said something heart-breaking: In this dirty and dirty world, you are not poor because you are lazy, nor because you have no ability, it is because you have made money, which is so clean.

"Hello everyone, I am a cosmic travel provider, now offering 999 free travel opportunities! Just reply 666 to get a free time travel! Various systems, draw immediately! Thousands of worlds for you to ride in! Beauty, immortality, rights, dreams, money, etc., Everything you want! Get you to the top of your life in minutes! Limited quantity, first come first served! Time travel is here! What are you waiting for!!!"

No, you just write about it in one world, but you change it every time when you feel comfortable, and the few people who are already there are all pissed off. What else are you writing? What was written well in modern times suddenly changed. It's disgusting, right? Still want to take advantage of the heat? There was no one left and everyone was rubbing their heads together.

Yes, the world of 99 is full of climaxes. One world, one way of writing. It's boring when you're all crazy.

I can no longer feel your ambition!

What Wei Mi wrote is that it can... I hope it won't end hastily like other worlds, and don't change worlds casually! At least complete the whole structure and replace it... The world in the past felt like this, very rushed, like the meal was half done, the rice was just served, and the meat was not even served yet, and a new dish was served (helpless). Every world, regardless of whether it is popular or not, once it is written, the foreshadowing and anticipation are heightened. For those who are already halfway through, it would be quite uncomfortable if the follow-up climax and ending are cut off, like the woman's aunt came to visit halfway through the house opening... Anyway, you can't guarantee that the new volume will satisfy more readers, right? Then why not write the climax and ending of the already opened volume, so that the reading experience of the already opened volume will be very good.

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Mystery's writing is more interesting than most dedicated Mystery fanfics

The more I read, the more boring I get, and the chapter titles are unattractive.

Gua, I want to see your extreme teeth!

What the hell, I deliberately skipped to read the mystery, but only a few chapters later, I adopted a daughter?

It was good at first, but then it got better and better. The writings of Yishi and Weimi are quite beautiful.

Everyone, do you have any other 99 streams to recommend?