Star Dome Train: Have I Become the World Tree?

Author: Have you played online games and other stand-alone games besides Mijia? Have you ever read novels such as online games? Online game templates are written in a nondescript manner. The skills in any game you play depend on RMB extraction! ? Instead of relying on the character's professional skill tree in the game to unlock professional skills through step-by-step upgrades, you can just copy the professional skill trees of Ragnarok, DNF, Rocky, FF14 and other mmorpg games without writing.

The expansion rate of this money is faster than the expansion of Bengtie's numerical value. More than twenty chapters are worth 1 million copper coins.

The author shouldn't write down specific values. I'm almost overwhelmed with the Bengtie numerical planning. If you don't know, just look at the Luanpo plot and you'll know. There are some Luanpo values ​​in it.

You don't have to use so many secondary creation abilities. You insist on fixing a wooden shield of Hokage, so you can't let go of that lump of Hokage?

It seems to be no different from the previous book. After all, I am writing about Mi You, not the fourth natural disaster.

Please don't write nonsense, okay? Before arriving at Pinoconi, people on the Star Dome Train didn't know that the clockmaker was an unknown guest.

I took a look at the free part, and found it to be just average for cats. It's considered boring among Bengtie fans.

It feels like the pace is relatively fast, there are no details, it's like an assembly line

It would be better if this bad protagonist was deleted.

I looked at the latest chapter and said, "Teach the God of Grass and Wood Release..." Are Naruto and Honkai Universe even competing against each other? "Besides, we should teach the descendants of the Flower and Tree Realm."

I heard that Iron Breaker Universe is more desperate than Warhammer 40k, and the protagonist's World Tree feels useless.

What's the use of just a few times the increase in physical fitness of ordinary people? The skill is pretty awesome, with several times the attack power, but it feels useless. The bonus of life is more than several times

Author, I have read your two books. Not only are they fully subscribed, they are almost the same. In fact, the core problems are that they put the cart before the horse. There are too many plots in your original book, and the protagonist is a bit marginalized.

The author's writing style has not improved yet, and various descriptions are still lacking. The appearance and environment descriptions are not completely copyable, such as the environment description in (Figure 1, Chapter 1 of Journey to the West). There is no need to describe the appearance like (Picture 2 Water Margin), but the appearance description (Picture 3 Tian Long Ba Bu) can obviously be copied and changed into your own

I felt lonely after watching it. No highlights. No motivation. It's almost 50 chapters updated. The main character is still hanging out. Let's advance the main plot a little bit Brother, this is the main world. There is more space written about Small World than Big World. It has no sense of existence. Sometimes I just brush it off. This approach can easily lead to collapse.

Let me talk about "my personal" views on the main line. My suggestion for Mi You's plot is to let it go. There is nothing that can't be overcome. If there is, it can be done with a wave of a golden finger. However, it is best if it does not affect the plot. We also know Mi You's ability to dig out foreshadowing. In this way, the protagonist spends most of the time as a bystander, but this is obviously not enough. The author wrote a little bit about the world view, that is, Chaos is the villain, and Yggdrasil is the god of faith. In this case, the main world will not be a large-scale RPG copy. I am very interested, but it depends on how the author writes it. As for the protagonist, I mainly talk about the identity of World Tree. I think it should be divided into priorities. This is because World Tree=divine power (faith?), Ye Yun=Gold Finger=♾️, and World Tree lost, right? I personally think World Tree can be used as a race and divine power as an auxiliary enchanting ability.

This book is not as well written as the previous one. The plot of the original world is too long.

First of all, your currency system has collapsed. With less than 50 coins, copper, silver and gold, the first two currencies are no longer necessary. More than 40 copies of the armor summoner only cost ten silver coins. The copper coins are not necessary at all, and the prices of various items are also unreasonable. Of course, the currency itself is not very important. This will let readers see whether you have carefully constructed it. In other words, do you have any intention? Reading a book full of errors lacks a sense of immersion. The second thing is your original plot. The main world is already in crisis, and the protagonist still has a game mentality. I don't know how to comment. It's obvious to you that you are borrowing the idea and writing method from this game which is too real. Call the players and let them guide the game, but the description of the protagonist in that book is better. At least in the early stage, players (that is, the heroes summoned by this book) will not die so easily. What affects the sense of substitution is basically the conflict between the setting and the protagonist, I feel. Lastly, there is the original plot, which accounts for too much. This is a must-have for fans. Well, to me, your home continent has little appeal. I only want to see the characters of Xing Heying or Yuanshen Bentie.

I don't want to say anything more, author, come on, don't let this cover down, at least it seems to be a little bit let down so far! I'm just here to step on it now, someone may scold you later!

Shouldn't this kind of book be in the next door? Every time I open a lot of Benjue Yuan Porridge and FGO fan fiction next door, I'm really impressed by this type of novel.

Genshin Impact

If possible, could you solve the magic circle? After all, if the protagonist is Yggdrasil, only Madoka can barely match the protagonist, right? The most I can do is take away the Flame Demon. To be honest, I really want to see what kind of chemical reaction the ring will have with the World Tree.

Happy New Year

The personalities of the main characters are well described, but the plot logic is a bit too idealistic and there are too many typos. You can carefully conceive the plot logic and then ask AI to help check for typos.

Happy New Year's Eve

I said why not update! I didn't expect it to be over!

Please let me know if you want to enter the palace 🙏

Dear readers, this book ends here. This subject matter is indeed not well written. In addition, I have encountered a lot of things recently, so I won't write this book. As soon as I write it, I think of my ex-girlfriend. We just broke up. I wrote this book to earn some money for her to buy cosmetics. I can think of her as soon as I write it. Let's start a new book the day after tomorrow, with the same theme and lottery type. You can join the fan group, and the book title will be posted in the group, or you can search my author's name on Qidian. Com, and you can find it. A new book will be posted the day after tomorrow.