Travel to the Heavens on the Star Dome Train

There are really enough bad books about Douluo, there is really no need to keep reading, right?

Zhu Zhuqing wrote the Douluo chapter. I don't know what effect it had on the plot. Anyway, I just watched a pure vase and finally got on the train. Is it so easy to get on the train? The protagonist gets on the train because he has a system to travel through the world. It is helpful for development, so everyone on the train team agrees. What is the use of Zhu Zhuqing? Is it just to appear that the protagonists are noble and have high moral character?

Have you watched the latest pv? Want to eat a book? 😁😁😁

Many people may be dissuaded by the plot of the previous Douluo part. In fact, the three views of this part are quite positive. The characters of the train crew are not crooked. There are some minor flaws but they can be watched. At present, these chapters of Yalilo 6 not only have a pure iron-breaking flavor, but also make many innovations, and do not completely follow the original plot. The main plot of Star Iron is slow to update, and the world view and side plots do not have enough space for fan fiction like Genshin Impact. Therefore, I think this writing method of interweaving the original plot of the railway and the world of opening up the heavens may be a way out for Star Railway fans, which can enrich the content to a great extent. The expansion of the heavens by the train crew will also cause changes in the main world of the railway, thus distinguishing the original plot of the railway and bringing a sense of freshness. This innovative writing method not only retains the essence of the original work, but also opens up a new world for fan creation

When the Star Dome Train arrives in Douluo Continent, it can only be said to be a big mess.

Bengtie's fanfics are basically a mess Because the power system of this thing is super idealistic, and the protagonists of most fanfics are, to put it bluntly, not even qualified to embark on their destiny. They are basically the template of a fast food protagonist, with no personality and no arc, purely relying on official sponsorship, and purely opening a harem. This kind of thing joins the Annihilation Gang, even worse than a prison prince, and wants to be an emissary.

Many people may be dissuaded by the plot of the previous Douluo part. In fact, the three views of this part are quite positive. The characters of the train crew are not crooked. There are some minor flaws but they can be watched. At present, these chapters of Yalilo 6 not only have a pure iron-breaking flavor, but also make many innovations, and do not completely follow the original plot. The main plot of Star Iron is slow to update, and the world view and side plots do not have enough space for fan fiction like Genshin Impact. Therefore, I think this writing method of interweaving the original plot of the railway and the world of opening up the heavens may be a way out for Star Railway fans, which can enrich the content to a great extent. The expansion of the heavens by the train crew will also cause changes in the main world of the railway, thus distinguishing the original plot of the railway and bringing a sense of freshness.

Why would you, a Destiny Walker, play with something from an indigenous planet? 😅 Isn't this equivalent to lowering your own status?

Just write the train set. Others are green leaves. Douluo is just a piece of shit. Waiting for the author to finish writing the train set, I will quit.

I think there is a big problem with this book now, that is, the world view of Star Iron is too strong, and the protagonist group is in a state of arrogance. This problem is especially obvious in One Piece. From the beginning, the characterization of the train was not to interfere too much with the overall pattern of the indigenous world. Then the protagonist group could not stand the fact that the Dracos let the slaves play battle royale, so they killed all the Dracos. The reason was that the Dracos had no effect on the world government and were purely burdensome, so they did not affect the world pattern. Then the World Government hunted down the protagonist group, and the protagonist group killed all the Five Old Stars and the CP organization, and sealed Im's abilities... I was really speechless. After the protagonist group left, the basic pattern of the pirates became: the world government was weak, the navy was intact, the pirates increased slightly, and the revolutionary army increased greatly. The structure of the entire One Piece world has been basically overturned by the protagonist group, and it is foreseeable that a world war will begin within a few years. Let me predict what will happen in the world of One Piece: the protagonist group breaks the myth of the invincibility of the world government, the revolutionary army begins to turn from darkness to light, and all forces are adding fuel to the fire. The navy will probably give the government a try in the final stage, or ignore the destruction of the world government. After the destruction of the World Government, the Navy and the Revolutionary Army had no basis of trust and each had their own interests and needs, so they would inevitably be unable to merge. In addition, the Revolutionary Army did not have that many people, making it easier for the Navy to take over the political legacy, and the world became divided into two major political powers. With development, rights will inevitably try to go one step further, that is, unify. The conflict between the two regimes will intensify and they will start to indulge the growth of pirates, because the pirates wanted by the other side are not our allies in a certain sense. Even if they can only cause some chaos to the other side, the pirates will slowly become more and more unscrupulous, and the victims will be the common people. Next comes war. I don't need to elaborate on the cruelty and sorrow of war. It can be said that the protagonist group has a share in all this. This shows that the concept of trains not interfering with the overall pattern is wise and correct. The protagonist group as a whole has fallen into the "chaotic good" camp. I think it's quite serious. It's basically fan writing OOC. Another point is that the author always arranges people to get on the bus, but does not arrange for people to get off. These people do not have many roles, they are extremely marginalized, and they are just a make-up. In the Pirates Chapter, Zhu Zhuqing said that he was willing to stay and deal with the aftermath of killing the Celestial Dragons. If he couldn't, he had to be taken away. Every time a person comes to this world, is the purpose of collecting stamps? If you want to lead, it is better for a pirate to lead Luffy than a ghost. Luffy fits well with Kailan, and his personality matches well with the protagonist group. It is recommended to open up new worlds with worldviews that are no less than those of Star Iron, such as "Problem Children Are From Another World", American comics, and "Morty and Rick". Go and hit the wall. Don't feel like a city dweller going to the countryside as soon as you open up the world.

😅Has Kesha's protection order been issued? To be honest, it would be incredible for a high-level destiny traveler.

I originally wanted to watch it, but I was immediately in awe when I saw the introduction, Douluo, Spirit Cage, Fox Demon, and Super God. These four alone can persuade a lot of people to quit. If you write the four of them together, you are like this👍🏻 I dare not read this book, I am like this👎🏻

I have read this book more than ten times, and every time I read about Douluo, I don't want to read it. Regardless of whether he is a hydrogen man or not, with Douluo's strength, any anti-matter soldier can kill him, and there is no point in going anywhere.

I don't mention this when writing Douluo. Help Zhu Zhuqing, help her cheat and change her destiny. Being kind-hearted is also in line with the character. In Douluo, she can still push the plot. But taking her on the train to collapse the iron is not understandable. Zhu Zhuqing is just a vase, with no ability and no character charm. She is not very good-looking, and her character design and development have nothing to do with her. I don't know what the use of writing about her is 🙂

The train set is quite restored It really doesn't matter but the character of the train set is maintained The aspect of awakening the martial soul is not a big problem for me personally, I just treat it as a way to experience the local folk customs. Others look okay. I am a Douluo comic reader and don't know much about the original work. I can only say that the author should keep updating and don't do any weird tricks.

I found that basically all the fan fiction underestimated Beng Tie's power system, or in other words, they didn't know the setting at all and just wrote it on the keyboard. For such an idealistic thing as Destiny, we must forcibly establish an entity level, and then start to compare, which strong people of various levels can destroy Destiny, and which strong ones can easily kill the Star God, I really want to laugh when I see it. First of all, the Star God is the embodiment of the destiny. He is immune to physics, energy, and the law of cause and effect. The Star God is the destiny itself. This is written in the setting. Becoming a Star God means you and I are inseparable from the destiny. It is not the agent of the destiny, the slave of the destiny. Only by being able to override the rules he represents and merge with the destiny can we completely kill the Star God. Secondly, although the destiny path only appears in the game Bengtie, in the setting, it traverses the entire tree of imaginary numbers, and there are infinite world bubbles in the world of the sea of trees. Various strong men in novels and animations, no matter how awesome they are, they raise their hands to destroy the universe. The universe, restart the timeline with one thought, no matter how awesome it is, it is a finite one after all. The finite cannot destroy the infinite, and it cannot completely destroy the destiny. Like any sacrificial path, even the Great Luo Jinxian, you can destroy countless universes with a single thought, but the infinite cannot be destroyed completely. As far as I know, only a state like the Daoguo Realm described in "The Lord of the World" that can modify the underlying logic can completely destroy the sea of ​​trees, because in this way, it breaks away from the narrative level and reaches the author's realm. Finally, if anyone feels that the XXX realm in the "XXX" novel can destroy the fate and destroy the sea of ​​trees, please bring out the original text to prove that it transcends the narrative level.

When I saw the results of this book, I wanted to laugh at those people who also wrote about Mi You's poor performance, and said they were being targeted. The writing in this book is so bad that it makes me slap in the face.

I feel that the author has written very well. The biggest feature is that it perfectly matches the character and the plot is also handled very well. Come on, author.

The characters of Train Crew, except for the beginning of March 7th, are all very well drawn The author seems to like Black Douluo very much. Although Tang San in Douyi is not a good guy, he is still okay among the protagonists in many books. He is a bit too dark.

The writing gets worse and worse, and it is really a failure when it comes to American dramas and Chinese comics with sparse plot lines. Also add flour. Isn't it true that wenqing's disease has taken over?

The God of the Douluo World = the high-level Destiny Walker of the Star World??? No, the Destiny Walker is such a noob. . .

Starting from the Iron Tomb, Xingtie has officially entered the era of fighting between rivals, and the size of the force is meaningless. The top individual strong men can completely insult and strengthen the entire world.

As the title shows, there are six worlds so far besides this world, Douluo, Fox Demon, Super Seminary, Pirates, Black Robe, and now Conan. Among the six, at least three have unclear meanings, namely Pirate Black Robe and the current Conan (I haven't read it since I was a fox demon). Black Robe and Conan have no desire to continue reading. Maybe those who read it feel that it is tasteless and it is a pity to abandon it. Personally, I think this subject matter is really good, and I can keep writing like Anne's book.

Will every subsequent world connection leave behind a protective backbone for that world? Or ask the people in power in that world if they agree to connect the two worlds?

I haven't read it, so I don't know if it's well written. The main reason is that the author said it on the first page, with a single female protagonist. That's okay, farewell 🙏

Sometimes the feeling of writing is not cute stupidity, but annoying stupidity

After reading the comment section, it seems that the protagonist has become a fan in the black robe. One person said forget it, and a dozen people said that there is a high probability that it is true.

Introduction: I deceived people and came in to kill them. It's completely unpleasant and resembles the Holy Mother.

I finally saw where the awkwardness was. I said that I always felt awkward after watching it for a long time. After watching it for a long time, I finally understood that the dialogue between the characters here was too awkward. Normally when writing a novel, the character dialogue should be the name of the protagonist. For example, your male protagonist is Meng Huaifeng. Explain. Or Tao. But you put the dialogue in the front and the characters in the back, so it looks very awkward. We have to look at the characters in the back first, and then look at the dialogue to know who said this, so it looks very awkward.

I saw the author saying that the world that follows the novel is a bit stuck due to his lack of experience, so I suddenly thought of opening this post. I will sort out the worlds that I think can be written about, that is, various works. I also hope that everyone can brainstorm together and crowdfund to add suitable work worlds that you know, fill in the name of the world (work), and the general world view and plot. I hope the author finds it helpful, and I hope that I can see my favorite world in this novel. Another thing I want to tell the author is that it is not necessary to write about a world with high combat power. In fact, there are many ways to write it. After all, this book is not about astronomy that pursues improving strength, and train crews are not something that needs to be pursued. You can carry out a salvation plot in the world of doomsday or major crisis, or write about an interesting world feature, such as dragons, game life, etc. This kind of rescue makes up for regretful tragedies, doomsday such as spiritual cages, two chickens in the backyard to save the world, daily life, etc., Battles and daily life, apocalypse and other worlds are interspersed, and there is also a collapse of iron plot. I may be a bit confused, but I probably get the idea.