From Forsaken Knight to Supreme Kingship

The writing is very good, and the plot is blunt. The oldest noble has no extraordinary attendants, so he takes a maid to investigate and kill the enemy. It is ridiculous. Shouldn't he lead dozens of subordinates to kill the enemy? The background of the great noble is there. If you have subordinates, you don't have to pretend to be bad. Don't you understand that the son of a rich man cannot sit down in court?

You're a disgusting writer of Clara plots, Shi

The professional performance of the protagonist is unattractive. The in-game operations are simple, straightforward and easy to use, but in the novel, the look and feel is monotonous and crude, lacking any means.

You framed me twice, just because you like me, so instead of retaliating, I help you. What kind of male logic is this?

Sometimes the protagonist's thoughts do not match those of high-level players. Generally, the protagonists set by Amber-style high-level players may be weak, but they are all strategists and have a half-god perspective. The failure of the plan should also be due to lack of strength. If you can't write a smart person, it is better to write that the protagonist is a reckless individual or a high-level thug in a large battle group, and have a special think tank to dig out the plot.

It was fine in the beginning, but after more than 30 chapters, it was really hard to forgive a character who had framed the protagonist twice and then carried it out.

Chapter 75 and I haven't taken up the job yet, so just give me credit as the author, and the protagonists are all people who have passed the mission. I can recall some very small side plots, but I can't remember the main plot. Hey, it's just for fun.

After reading one or two chapters, I didn't want to read anymore. It felt too intellectual. Did I write too much white text and make myself stupid?

The author's level is average, the writing is too blunt, and the professional strength with simple skills cannot be written. What is the strength? Upgrade to get more attribute bonuses? Unique professional abilities, more spell slots, unique equipment lengths, just saying they are rare, can't tell anything about their strength. The writing is sparse

The plot at the beginning was watered down for 85 chapters, but nothing came of it. The key is that even before taking office, there were at least a few lines of work that I wanted to do.

Why did you spend so much space and ink on Clara's ceremony before she became invisible immediately afterwards? There is no such person in the search. Don't you think the author feels disconnected?

I feel like it will be unfinished, the writing style is very immature, and I can clearly feel that I am a newbie.

But your updates are too few. Can you please update more?

Can system outages be reduced? The rest is great! The system does not have a strong sense of presence, and optimization can be completely removed to increase the reading experience and immersion.

It is recommended that NPCs should not mention the color of their equipment. It is a bit of a joke. Now it is a real world. White is ordinary, green is excellent/magic, blue is excellent, purple is epic, gold is legendary, and red is artifact. Common weapon classifications are based on the author's own. Even old bookworms can read it. Even if the classic routine is placed at the starting point of junk novels that are everywhere nowadays, it is still food worth looking forward to

I've read too many novels, and I always feel a bit awkward without character cards.

It's quite a classic novel, with a reasonable setting and a good rhythm. I don't know why so few people have read it. Friends who read this review, please come in and take a look.

Great book, I want to see how Clara progresses. 🙂

It feels like there are multiple heroines, but I still hope there will be a reply from the author.