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The incompetent consumable protagonist has a system and doesn't want to escape 🙂

A three-foot-long fish from the beginning? Do you know how big it is over three feet long? He also said that he left a wound on the silverfish. The silverfish was a normal size, but it swallowed it in one bite. How can a human being write this?

Can anyone explain to me why there is always this kind of world of cultivating immortals recently, and then fishermen are born? A broken ship, getting a plug-in, are these written by AI, or what? One or two, you have to say that he is not good at it. The details of how people get along with each other are quite good. However, there is no development at all in the plug-in. It feels like he has come up with an idea and there is no follow-up extension. In this regard, you want to say that he is good at it, right? It feels so awkward and inhuman.

Release yourself from the underground of Baishan Mountain. The writing is very messy.

Not a cool article. The protagonist is a slave restricted by the bond. After getting Goldfinger, he is "forced" to desperately help the slave owner obtain resources. The protagonist is probably a virgin. There is a heroine with an incomplete cerebellum. She listens to the protagonist's enemy and attacks the protagonist, intending to kill the protagonist. The protagonist has no intention of going back for revenge, he just treats him as a stranger who may be included in the harem later. I can't stand it anymore, whoever can stand it should continue.

In fact, the author writes very seriously and has his own ideas. I wish the author will write better and better.