I Use Teleportation to Deliver Food in the Universe

"I'm delivering food in the universe with teleportation" poison test post: The setting party is ecstatic, but I did this poison first One sentence summary Delivery boy Li Xin travels across the interstellar space and starts delivering food with the teleportation skill of "Honor of Kings" (can only be used once a day). As a result, he picks up a dark matter "power bank" on a garbage star. Let's talk about the advantages first: This setting is really good 1. The golden finger is controlled, not brainless. The protagonist's teleportation skill can only be used once a day. This restriction allows the story to have a reasonable rhythm. It's not that you're invincible at the start, but you have to plan carefully – is today's order worth it? What should I do if I encounter danger after using it? This "limited superpower" setting is more exciting than teleportation without cooldown. 2. The setting of dark matter is a bit interesting "Dark matter is the memory left when the stars are broken, and the last words of civilization floating in the universe" - this setting connects hard-core science fiction and humanistic care. Every piece of dark matter used by the protagonist is essentially the tomb of a civilization. The "memory solidification" technology mentioned by Lao Ma in Chapter 4 is even more horrifying to think about: using dark matter to seal the entire earth, and the time inside will stand still, waiting to be slowly drained away. This setting has both the imagination of science fiction and the critical meaning of dystopia. 3. The foreshadowing was laid very carefully At the end of Chapter 4, Lao Ma said that the person who saved him fifteen years ago would also teleport, and predicted the arrival of the protagonist. He left a final sentence: "Tell him that the earth has not disappeared, but has been hidden. Hidden in a place that only he can find." The suspense is very high - who is that mysterious man? Why can it be predicted? Why is he not in this universe, but in "memory"? I have the motivation to catch up. 4. The writing is online and has a strong sense of atmosphere The author's writing has a certain texture and is not a dry web account. For example, this paragraph: "The starry sky is beautiful. But when every star goes out, someone will hear the cry. And he is riding a broken motorcycle, delivering food among the tombs of the stars." The gray sky of the garbage star, the depressive feeling of the abandoned mine, and the silent stares in the spaceship, the atmosphere is well rendered. Let's talk about the poisonous point: be careful what you say 1. The pace is a bit slow After the first five chapters, there are almost no scenes where the protagonist actually uses teleportation skills to deliver food. He spent most of his time wandering around garbage stars, distribution stations, and abandoned mines, chatting with old horses, being chased by men in black, and receiving mysterious invitations. The "delivery food" in the title of the book is currently just a background setting, and the main plot is "the truth about the earth being sealed" and "who is the mysterious person". If you come here for the "daily life of a cosmic delivery person", you may be disappointed. 2. The supporting role has a clear tendency to be a tool Xiao Zhao in Chapter 5 was suddenly stamped "problematic" by Lao Ma. The reason is: Xiao Zhao answered the phone, and the other party didn't say who it was, so Xiao Zhao knew he was looking for the protagonist - and then Lao Ma concluded that Xiao Zhao was the mole. Although this reasoning makes sense logically, there is too little foreshadowing and it seems stiff. Xiao Zhao's only role currently is "suspicious" and his character is thin. 4. Is the science fiction setting hardcore? It's actually quite soft Dark matter, memory solidification, interstellar energy monopoly - these concepts sound bluffing, but the author does not intend to delve into the scientific principles, and is more of a plot tool. Hardcore sci-fi fans may be thinking "that's it?" This book is essentially a suspenseful adventure covered in science fiction, and science fiction is just an atmosphere group. Suitable for the crowd · Readers who like the "limited golden fingers + suspense main line" set · Those who like the "daily + grand setting" hybrid style of "Abnormal Creatures" · Can accept slow heat,