End-of-the-World Civilization Investigator

Save money: Purely imaginative writing, the plot and characters are just to show the imagination and setting to some extent, and I feel that the author is just writing for self-interest. Those who are interested in novel settings and plots can simply try it ps: If you want to try it, I suggest you read more, such as seeing the second magic Girls' World enters the city (it's not particularly long anyway), otherwise you may not see the part that will attract you (I only recommend that people who personally think they like novel and imaginative settings take the time to try it) The following is a detailed review (some personal opinions) The setting is indeed quite novel, whether it is the main line of observing and exploring the doomsday or the super power Goldfinger. It's imaginative, and it won't make people feel boring as expected. But many times the way it is performed is not good and makes it a bit uncomfortable to watch. What should I say about the plot... The experience of the first and second world is very different. The style feels completely different. It is not very interesting, but you can watch it. It mainly depends on your imagination and what kind of work the author can do. Next, let me talk about three problems that are probably caused by the author's concept: logic, rhythm, and character The first is logic. In most cases, it is logical, but the foundation of this logic is unstable and not smooth. For example, in my first dinosaur world, people from the future destroyed the original dinosaurs, and the dinosaurs from the future came to stop it. This makes sense, but this was achieved without considering cause and effect, future situations, and other aspects, which means it is not powerful enough. Then there is the issue of the inconsistency. It feels like the author's writing is limited, or he doesn't care at all. During the reading process, the logic is very inconsistent. You have to think about it yourself, just like riding in a car without weight loss on a bumpy mountain road. The experience in terms of logic is relatively bad. It depends on the individual. Some people may find this level uncomfortable, while others find it quite good. The plot rhythm of this novel is very strange. The first world has a completely uncomfortable rhythm. It feels a bit tiring to watch, and the entire plot experience is very bad. For example, the length of the descriptions of various battles in the first world is inappropriate, and there are also cases where the text is placed in messy places. Then there are the character designs, how should I put them? It is entirely for the sake of the plot and setting. At most, some things that the author personally finds interesting are added, but the evaluation is completely unattractive. I don't comment on the character logic. The last thing I want to talk about is the character design of the protagonist. I still like the protagonist at the beginning. He has a brain, thinks about things comprehensively, and has high execution ability. He can also think calmly in crisis situations. I feel that he surpasses more than 99% of the protagonists in online novels. But since I got the golden finger, my character has become more and more casual. The whole person's mentality and way of thinking have become very casual. Whether it is going up to fight the dinosaurs or exploring the early stage of the magical world or entering the city, the actions lack purpose, which feels a bit lacking for a novel protagonist. I have no problem with casual characters. The protagonist of the novel I wrote also has a casual character, but the changes in this book are too quick and abrupt. Summary: The core of the author's book is part of the plot and imaginary settings. The rest of the book only serves these. Whether it is the characters or the plot, it depends on whether you like those settings and imaginative settings, and whether you can get on the airwaves with the author.

The writing is okay, but it was cut too fast. My father-in-law should serve the people in the palace honestly. Do you know how long it took the author of Metropolis to put it on the shelves? Even though the writing now has actually deviated from the original intention, there are still many people supporting it.

There are a lot of typos and sentences, but they are not very disturbing. The content is quite good.