Douluo: the End of Nirvana

The introduction is a bit complicated and prevents readers from getting the theme. The protagonist's name, martial soul, and soul ring configuration are a bit spanning 20,000 years. You can't let readers think that your protagonist has fallen out of the "reasonable scope" from the beginning. Then there is the conflicting relationship between the characters, which is a bit too deliberate, but this is something that many novels cannot satisfy, which is normal. After talking about the shortcomings, let's talk about the advantages. The overall narrative style is okay, and there is no such thing as pretending to be 13 at every turn, and being able to persist for more than 100 chapters proves that it has a solid foundation. After correcting the above shortcomings, people can watch it with confidence (The Third Ring Ten Thousand Years is still too supermodel, it just says "I have a great opportunity" written on my face.)

This introduction is about Mao asking questions to be the Riddler, and Wuhun is too common, and it feels like there is no innovation. Nowadays, Douluo is almost written to death. Only innovation can be seen. The most important thing is that the flavor of the second design is too strong, and it feels inexplicable.

The number of words in some paragraphs is too long I read a lot of online articles I don't feel comfortable reading them at first glance I read some novels that have been updated I found that a paragraph is usually 4 lines (my mobile phone shows it, almost 50 words or less) And there are rarely that many Usually 2.3 Lines

I want Bibi Dong to be the heroine, the author can arrange it

If you don't hold back your hair, 400,000 words can be written in two days, which is so fierce.

The writing is pretty good, I quite like the setting, the hooks are enough, the world view is great, and it has a different feeling compared to other fics 😁 Come on, author

What is the author's purpose in writing this book? I won't go into details about generating electricity for love If I want to sign a contract and put it on the shelves, I will wait for the author to reply to me. I will talk about the problem from my personal perspective.