Gou Lives in the Sect and Practices Immortality

My head hurts when I see these brainless women. Their name is Gou. Then all kinds of women posted it. When the work started, the sect sister invited me to kill the monsters. She said that the protagonist's cultivation level might disappoint the brainless women. This woman almost cried. Brother, you don't write with brains. You can't say that you don't want everyone to read with brains. Just say that everyone should lose their brains. What kind of glass heart is it?

Just do whatever you want and don't affect your state of mind. There's no such thing as cause and effect. And isn't this thing just a favor? There is no need for such lofty explanations as cause and effect.

I recommend the follow-up novel "Eternal Life: Step by Step to Immortality", which has a positive outlook on life, a smooth plot, and a grand world view. No traffic, please support me [holding fists]

The currency has collapsed, cut it off

The writing is quite good, and the paragraphs could be divided into one more point. I am still a 14-point small font, and it only has four or five lines at every turn, which makes it uncomfortable to read. Traditional Xianxia, ​​the number of words is too long, the writing is detailed, and the number of words is not enough, which leads to the main plot progressing too slowly. The introduction is about the sect, farming and growing, but it is only in the 30th chapter that he goes to the sect to become a disciple By the way, if you want to write an emotional drama, you should be the role card of the heroine. I just want to know which of these women are the heroines and which are the supporting women.

The biggest problem with this book is that the combat power is too exaggerated. Dozens of foundation-building pills can be refined at the seventh level of Qi training, which can severely damage the foundation-building stage, and a large formation can be deployed to withstand the later stages of foundation-building. The gap in combat power between Qi-training and foundation-building is written too small.

I can't stand it at all. I'm so stubborn here. I'm so shameless.