I Was a Prisoner in the Song Dynasty

I came from Douyin and only read the first chapter 1. The novel should not be in the first person 2. The description of the environment is passed in one stroke 3. The crisis starts too slowly and there are too many characters. You can pass it through from the perspective of God, and then directly think about ways to break the situation or introduce cheats 4. Don't write so many sensory painful experiences of the protagonist. The reader cannot be substituted and will only feel Sorry, let's just say it in one stroke 5. Goldfinger is too wordy. You can say that this is a book that looks familiar. At the beginning of the second conflict, the protagonist accidentally discovers (part of) the functions of Goldfinger, and the rest is a sense of follow-up expectation 6. The image of the villain is too thin. Can he be designed as a fellow villager who once bullied the protagonist, a friend who betrayed the protagonist, or a gangster who covets the protagonist's family property? 7. The villain will not explain these things to the protagonist. He will only make the protagonist die quickly, so the jailer should not appear in the beginning 8. The protagonist can communicate with fellow inmates and obtain information, including that many people in the prison are wrongly accused, and that the jailer is not a good person to introduce the main plot