Don't Worry, I'm Really a Casual Cultivator.

There is a problem with the positioning of the protagonist. The casual cultivator collecting the corpse is just dreaming. The corpse of the casual cultivator is either taken away by the magic gate to refine the corpse or made into a puppet. At worst, the corpse is thrown into the blood pool to accumulate blood energy, or the casual cultivator encounters the corpse after searching for his body's finances and throws the body into the wilderness to feed the monsters, or The monks were used by casual cultivators to practice magic skills, and wherever a casual cultivator went to collect the corpses of monks as many as possible, it was more reasonable to change the address of a handyman from the Demon Gate or the righteous path to collect the corpses, and the subsequent plot would be easier to write. These are my few suggestions.

The setting problem is very big. If a corpse is collected from the world of immortality, it will either be used by the devil to refine the corpse, or it will kill a person and feed it to the monster beasts, or it will be burned with a fireball! There is absolutely no possibility of collecting corpses. It is not a strange world. Didn't I think about it before writing it?

I don't understand why people go into the mountains if they are all skilled in crafts. Isn't it good to make money by crafting?

In the world of immortality, there is no such profession as a corpse collector! No need at all!

The clone is out of ideas. Can you let me read hundreds of thousands more words before writing the clone? You really gained such a huge reward after taking the dungeon, but you actually changed into a clone. You can't do this to suppress your combat power, right? The current immortality writing is also outrageous. They always like to come up with names that are difficult to pronounce and difficult to remember. It is okay to be more advanced in the later stage, but if you do it as a novice, it will easily make people sleepy.

It's a bit watery. The author simplified it and wrote more than ten chapters in a small party 😥

The first 30 chapters are okay, but the rest is a bit watery.

A nice book, give me food and grass🌿

Come on, come on, write well. 😆

The writing is good, but the progress of the realm is still slow. It is recommended to update it two or three times a day. One update is too slow.

In fact, the writing is pretty good. It's a little bit toxic at the beginning, but the writing gets better and better later on.

The plot is mediocre, and a new map should have been interesting. As a result, he became a lonely ghost again. If you don't add new people and plot, where will the ups and downs of the plot come from?

Since the author is new and writing a book for the first time, there are deficiencies in some aspects, such as the plot design is relatively stiff and the combat plot is not very good... The data of this book is actually not very good. Although the follow-up reading has been increasing, it is still less than 100 recommended in the first round. There is still a big gap in the number of reads on the Internet, and there is a high probability that it will be streaked =_= until it reaches 300,000 words before it is published... The author of Poujie has calmed down and can work full time. Since this is the first book signed, I will continue to write and accumulate experience in writing long novels. At the same time, I would also like to thank all the readers who have been following me for reading. It is your support that gives me the motivation to continue!

Are city and city the same thing? Why do we always say we are in the city when we are in the city?

I've read the first 4 chapters. If the following chapters are of the same level, they will be popular. It's a great book.

The writing is okay, but the descriptions of fighting techniques are all melee combat with swords!

The subject of collecting corpses is pretty bad. I don't know what this one is like.

Not to mention the plot, there are some incompatible parts in the public chapters. The two chapters where the fat man takes the protagonist to find the mother and daughter are the same as the end of the previous chapter and the beginning of the next chapter, and the plot does not correspond. Maybe I didn't read it when I changed it. Moreover, in the article, Fire Crow Xiaoliu sometimes becomes Xiaoqi. I hope the author can polish the plot and writing more, and the review will be improved.

I worship the boss, and I would like to recommend this to you: "I Have a Moon and Sun Orb" is popular among mortals, and I hope you can give me your opinions.

You can read it, it's good, it's basically not poisonous. It's really hard to find a suitable book to read in Qidian. The books recommended by the editors are hard to describe.

I've read fifty or sixty chapters so far it's pretty good.

What time do you update? It's already 1:30

Let's talk about the evaluation. Nowadays, many immortality novels are more like working as a laborer, cultivating immortality skills and magic, such as mathematics, physics and chemistry. But the problem is that the novels we want to read are strange, strange, new and immortal. Therefore, the novels written by the author may be read by some people, but they will not be popular.

This author is definitely a seasoned vest