Xuanjian Clan of Immortals: Travel Through Time and Become Li Jingtian

You are proving and insisting on disobedience! Do you dare to prove it? !

Immortal Lord Zhini returns across time and space.

Everything is ethereal, they are all floating clouds that cannot be relied upon.

The author's attitude is good, and he can actually update so much every day, which is outstanding among Xuanjian fan fiction! It's just that the writing is really not good. I only read the first few chapters and then kept it on my bookshelf. Author, your book has a similar problem to the most popular recent Xuanjian fan book "Reincarnation and Seeking the Way". They both want to enslave or control Jianzi from the beginning. . . Writing like this will really cause the story's logic to collapse. The 🐢🐢 in Jianzi now looks weak, but from the original plot of Si Tianwei Beitaisu's book, we know that 🐢's current situation was probably set by himself, and he was temporarily stung for some terrible plot. Fu, he is very likely to have the means to restore a considerable part of his previous life's strength at any time. In his previous life, he was at the level of an Immortal Lord or even directly the Master of Qingxuan. How could he be manipulated by Xiao Xiu like this? If he was really manipulated, the most likely development of the story would be to directly trigger his back-up plan to prevent accidents! Of course, regardless of whether it is reasonable or not, even if you really want to control the Jianzi, you should not use this method of mechanical deity at the beginning. You must know that the Jianzi is different from Han Li's little green bottle. The little green bottle is an object, but there is a living being in the Jianzi who has traveled through time. If you really want to control the Jianzi, you should do it later in the story, after going through many games, and the plan is more sinister than the Taiyin. Wouldn't it be more rewarding to write this way? But at the beginning of the story, you should practice cultivation honestly, don't be so ambitious and just focus on the Immortal Lord. First, you can achieve Yurun, and then learn from Taiyuan and then reach the enlightenment status. Wouldn't the content of the Golden Elixir Queen be very interesting to write? I won't have to fight hard to beat the progress in the mid-term. I'm eagerly waiting🐔 to write down the detailed settings after the pregnancy. My personal favorite Xuanjian fan so far is the book "Seeing the Moon on the Cold River". You can refer to the author. Unfortunately, it would be perfect if the other party had an update attitude like yours!

I really can't do it anymore, I'm really stubborn and disobeying the Immortal Lord

If you traveled back in time just to follow the plot of the original work, but you have an extra Li Jingtian, then I feel like you might as well read the original work. Because you wrote a lot of it according to the original work