Tokyo: My Girlfriend Is a Chess Saint

When I first read Chapter 30, I was shocked. The communication between the male and female protagonists was so natural and comfortable. Who is this extraterrestrial demon?

Why isn't my girlfriend Ke Jie?

The taste is too pure, that's what it tastes like.

I am a person who does not read light novels very much. I was not interested in love or the interaction of emotions and relationships before. When I read this book, I had a deep feeling of "It's amazing to be able to write such delicate words." Regarding the reading experience of this book, I can see some immature aspects, but the overall writing style is smooth. More importantly, you can feel the energy the author put into polishing the characters and words. Finally, regarding the beginning, in my opinion, it is very courageous to start with the heroine committing suicide. Only the so-called large amount of psychological description can stabilize this plot.

The first 200,000 words are fairy grass. I hope this post will not be deleted. I think if I follow the previous writing method and finish it within 1 million words without being greedy, this novel will definitely have good results.

Where does the devil from the outside come from? It doesn't look like a newbie. Does the author have any other books?

No system, no dark game. Is it impossible to be reborn in another world without a system? Why is it that the seams are getting more complex and messy now? Can't we win without a system? It sounds like an invincible novel from the beginning, but if it still suppresses combat power like this, it all depends on the system? If you can't write long stories, can you write short stories? Why add some weird settings? It may seem like it's enriching your content, but it's actually detached from the topic. What is lightness in light novels? Have to choose

It's so good. What should I do if it's five o'clock? What should I do if I have a meeting at nine o'clock? It's so good. Two more chapters.

I feel that the recent plot, starting from the time when the principal forced the protagonist and the two of them to go to some underground Go world, has been a bit inexplicably skewed. Maybe you should take a few days off to sort out the plot.

The male protagonist has a golden finger, but he can't stand it. The male protagonist is like a salted fish. He lies down every day and dreams of becoming the richest man in Japan. He has almost no development of the golden finger. The interaction with the female protagonist was quite good before, but suddenly the female protagonist is assigned a background of Japan's top chaebol, and she is suspected of being used as a villain. With the male protagonist's current state of play, how can he win? There are still big problems with the Go plot. The male protagonist helps the female protagonist to become a chess master. There is no clear main plot. I just write whatever comes to my mind. When the male protagonist only fed a few AI chess records and didn't go through a lot of games, the female protagonist's chess skills improved rapidly, and it was open to the female protagonist. They are obviously two people with top talents, but now they are content with the status quo and don't work hard at all. The male protagonist has a system, but is addicted to frying fish. The female protagonist has top talents, but is not determined, wavering between Go and the male protagonist. The result is that readers don't know what the hero and heroine are doing every day. Apart from falling in love, these two people have no ambition at all. The main point of criticism is the male protagonist. He was a world champion in his previous life, but he is a mess in this life. I doubt that the male protagonist won the world crown by raising his hand. Moreover, the updates are now unstable, and the plot progress is even slower, falling into an endless loop. It would be great if it could be worth 10,000 per day and the progress of the main line could be faster.