The Beginning of Road Survival Starts with a Portable Mine!
公路求生之开局随身矿洞！
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 45k Words
- Genre
- Sci-Fi
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Apocalypse
- Updated
- 5mo ago
- Source
- Qidian
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The pace is fast and the plot is fast
At the beginning, the protagonist grabs two people and turns them into slaves. He introduces the situation and cheats. Everyone quickly starts to divide into groups. They don't know why they regard the protagonist as the enemy (make up a good reason, otherwise you will lose your wits) and start the road. The big guys get supplies and various things. After reading this, I found that the pace is very fast But because it is too fast, many things can be described in paragraphs or dialogues. For example, why do you suddenly hate the protagonist and treat the protagonist like this? The overall problem is that it feels a lot like writing narration. It might be better to just improve the sense of immersion, such as how to write dialogues in Baidu online novels.