Family Cultivation: Starting from a Small Stone Pagoda

Author, you don't have any big hits in the early stage. Only if you have more, can you attract more readers. What you have now is too little.

The previous story about a normal family cultivating immortality is very nice, and the characters are well drawn. But when the mayor took the demon elixir, there was an obvious poisonous point. The old casual cultivator wanted to kill the mayor, because he was afraid that the mayor would kill someone and silence him, so he attacked first. At this time, Chen Qingwei had to choose one of the two to see which side to help. In the end, she chose C and ran away. She also sealed the entrance of the cave and let the two duel. This means that no matter who wins, she will definitely offend a future fake elixir cultivator. My brain was healed after seeing this paragraph. I didn't expect that there was such a stupid solution. Secondly, the pace of the whole book is too tiring. After more than a hundred chapters, the whole story is full of ups and downs. The protagonist is just like Conan, with endless cases to solve. Then the main character's ability to suppress his combat power can really make people laugh. The wishing items he worked so hard to obtain can only reach a small level or even reach a lower level. Suppressing the protagonist's combat power and keeping him in crisis forever is convenient for you to write novels to create conflict, but it is very frustrating for readers. In the middle stage of Qi training, the protagonist will be troubled by those in the later stage of Qi training. In the later stage of Qi training, the protagonist will be troubled by those in the foundation building stage. In the early stage of foundation building, the protagonist will be troubled by those in the late stage of foundation building. He will be targeted no matter what. So isn't the protagonist's progress in vain? Also, the intelligence decline becomes more serious as you go later. The protagonist can kill the foundation-building monks, but the protagonist team still feels that the genius of their family is out. In the eyes of outsiders, they are just a small family that does not take charge in the later stages of Qi training. A mortal wants to talk to a woman of extraordinary temperament, but is knocked over by non-physical means. His first reaction is not to suspect that she is an immortal master, but to become furious. What does this mean? He thinks he does not live long enough. In addition, there are many small poisonous points that are nothing in comparison. The most serious problem is the arrangement of opportunities. From the beginning to the end, one event after another, one opportunity after another, exploring the secret realm. Just after searching, I found that there are secret realms in the secret realm. I searched again and found that there are still secret realms. The large intestine and the small intestine look huge torn apart, and there are basically few opportunities in the early stage. By eighty or ninety Chapter, the opportunity explodes, and you can enter the secret realm and have everything like spiritual fruit, heaven and earth spiritual roots, golden lotus, elixir prescriptions, divine swords, wishing power statues, golden elixir Taoist inheritance, etc., Don't you think it's very problematic? These things that don't fit together are all stuffed into a secret realm. It's completely like what the protagonist lacks is shoehorned into the plot. Moreover, a group of Qi practitioners can call out names when they see something. The reason is that they have read more miscellaneous books, which is really too fake. And Chen Qingwei is like cheating. She can cut down the secret realm from beginning to end. She has just finished cutting down a monster, and after exploring it, the next monster comes again. She is simply superhuman! He is Chakra, she is Chakra. Moreover, the arrangement in the secret area is very problematic. The main theme is "explore-kill monsters-harvest". It's too formulaic. When you see the treasure, you know that a fight is going to happen.

When I first looked at the title, I thought it didn't look good, so I gave up! I really can't find any good books later, so I'll just read it! As a result, the more I read, the more wonderful the writing became!

If we don't bring back the fruit trees, we won't need any sustainable resources?

I couldn't stand it when I saw the title of this book. It's too abstract.

The first part is okay, but later we start talking about the Immortal Cultivation Family. There is no chance that the protagonist will appear. This is a novel about family cultivation under the guise of a protagonist.

The author writes randomly, have you ever practiced immortality? Have you become a tower? Have you ever traveled through time? Just write 😏

Give it a half year and then read it again. I hope the author is not a eunuch.

I ordered 100 chapters in vain and haven't read it for more than two months. When I opened it today, it was a eunuch.

It's beautiful, but it's too slow.

I saw a book about traveling through time and turning into stone, which is similar to this one

If the author doesn't explode, he will definitely attack