
I'm Looking for Talent at Marvel
我在漫威挖人才
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 703k Words
- Genre
- Sci-Fi
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Time Travel
- Updated
- 1mo ago
- Source
- Qidian
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Did you watch Lao A's live broadcast and tell the agents to persuade people to come to China to write this introduction?
Are there any heroes who don't kill? For example, the plot of breaking a criminal's legs and calling him an ambulance If you can't get the money for the ambulance, you have no choice but to be a Gundam. If you have money, it is easier to take more ambulance calls. According to the medical insurance that increases every time, it is difficult to say when you will go bankrupt.
There's something interesting about this subject, and it's been a hot topic on the Internet lately.
If you change the "crouching" scene in the previous chapters, it will affect the perception too much.
Give the author a suggestion
This book is okay, but it has a lot of minor flaws, such as a bit too much nonsense; the plot sometimes suddenly deviates from the main plot, or a small scene suddenly appears. If the author doesn't know how to change it, you can listen to the plot you wrote using audiobook software. Based on my experience in the past few years, the most important thing about whether a book is well written or not is that the plot flows smoothly and is not uncomfortable when listening to the book.
I would like to make a suggestion, that is, after digging each talent into another world, use some pen and ink to describe what those talents did in the other world and what changes they made. Earlier you said how this person is so awesome, but the reader cannot feel this. Only by writing these out can the reader know what they have done.
Good
The subject matter is okay, but the writing is too elementary and lacks characteristics.
Overall, it looks pretty good, except that at the beginning, I jump directly from the kill line to the people next to Tony. The jump is too fast, and it feels a bit awkward.
The protagonist's name is Zhang Dingfeng, why not Yang Dingfeng?
The main character's name is so bad, I couldn't even think of it after 10 years of cerebral thrombosis.
It's popular, the framework is good, but the details are not good and it's easy to blow people away.
Can the Wolf Warrior's mouth habit be deleted?
After reading Chapter 7, I wanted to delete the book when I felt bad for the second time. But the subject matter was okay. I'll look at it again and hope it won't be there later. It's too destructive.
You could totally delete the abbreviations in the first two chapters, they're too ink.
The little story at the beginning is too long-winded, and it's just a repeat of what's found online! Not interesting!
It's so fake. It's completely deceptive.
If you go to a public university in the United States, you should look at your grades, and if you go to a private university in the United States, you should look at letters of recommendation.
America in the Marvel Universe: Have you seen it? I said that Dongda is not a good thing. They poach us every day. Look at the wall they just built. Not only did the wall disappear overnight, but we were left with holes 😭😭😭
The flying clubs mentioned in the introduction are not those flying clubs established by the head of state, right😳😅🤣
Don't just focus on Marvel. There are many scientists in American comics with weird faces. One person can easily develop the technology to cause a crisis in the universe.
If you don't help Tony kill the Winter Soldier and deal with Captain America, I'll despise you.
Now that you have a system, you still insist on going to that school?
Is this book a system or a letter of recommendation? If you insist on writing a letter of recommendation, mark it if it is written by AI. Don't be disgusting.
Follow the hot spots
Now it's Epstein who exposes cannibalism🙂
It's a pity. If the author had written the words "brain storage" at the beginning of the first chapter, this book would have been a big seller.
Good Guys Prison A makes a nest (cover)
Now that you have money, why not open a charity organization and screen out talents?
It would be nice if the protagonist's surname was Yang, but it's a pity 🙂
The idea is okay, but when I write it, I feel like it smells like bean bags... First of all..., Secondly..., Get xx+xx+xx, definitely xxx