Tokyo: Love Begins by Controlling the Eldest Lady

Although the author's IQ is not high enough, and he still does the bad job of singing covers of Chinese songs to move the non-Chinese-speaking audience to tears, but playing SM is really exciting

Hmm (chew chew chew) Frown (chew chew chew) Comfortable (chew chew chew) Pleasure (chew chew chew) Frown (chew chew chew) Continue (chew chew chew) End It is edible, a higher-end roadside stall, but it may not have a business license, and the ingredients are a bit too hard. Whether you want to escape or not depends on your personal anti-toxic properties.

Why does it all start with this kind of debt? 😅

Can you give the protagonist some intelligence? I can't stand it if he continues to be so half-tangible.

I'm almost done with Chapter 33 of the Campus Chapter. Guys, please read this comment. Real. I give it a 5 out of 10 points. First of all, all the good things in this book are foreshadowing the fact that the protagonist is a turtle man. The indecisiveness is engraved in your bones, and I almost didn't give you the Minotaur plot, which makes your blood pressure high. The main character doesn't look like a normal person.

A very classic opening. The topless heroine fights and solves troubles at the beginning to attract attention. I have read 3 books about this kind of opening. I hope the author can write better in the future.

The protagonist seriously lacks subjective initiative. One is the task completion level. I have never thought about whether trying to increase the completion level will increase the rewards. The other is that I think the system's hosting is more useful than the protagonist's strategy. The protagonist's behavioral logic is comparable to an adult banana.

Author, do you think the male protagonist in your novel is a moral person or a eunuch?

There is no desire to watch

I dare not eat more of the chocolate mixed with the defense, and I dare not look at it even if it is limited.

The protagonist is a pure fool. He has forgotten the first Qingmei. Qingmei points out that "I was obviously the first to meet **" and "**has forgotten the original agreement?" And after asking for a hug, he thought this person was a slut and alienated Qingmei even more👎🏼👎🏿👎👎🏾

The protagonist is so half-sugar but not sweet-looking that it's really difficult to stretch

The author promises me not to be a general eunuch like Yinghuo, okay?

The eldest daughter of a chaebol eats chocolates worth 500 yen each, and the classmates around her who go to private aristocratic schools are still envious. Author, are you sure it's okay?

It feels like the protagonist is like a real-life Jiahao image who is self-righteous, ignorant of the heights of the world, and invincible after having the system. Many types of novels, such as Japanese animation, cannot be investigated carefully and cannot support some logical reasoning at all. Just like ordinary high school students in Japan helping the eldest lady handle government affairs, it is particularly outrageous. Maybe because I am the protagonist, I think others are so stupid. It is a sin that the protagonist must commit, the sin of arrogance.

The male protagonist written later is completely stupid, but when facing Sasaki, he becomes normal. I know he is underage, but there is no need to make the author so stupid

I feel that the heroine's image setting is quite good, but the male protagonist's character feels quite awkward and uncomfortable to watch.

Singing a cover of a Chinese song by Miyuki Nakajima in a Japanese variety show 🥵

I couldn't watch it until it was released. The author inexplicably kept setting up misogynistic settings for the protagonist. Normally, he would either start a harem or engage in pure love. What you wrote made me sure that the protagonist is a gay man. He is pure misogynist. Several women have not responded to their comments, and he still wants to cut off relations with them. You can just say that these women have bad characters. They have good personalities and family backgrounds, and they love the protagonist alone. You keep pushing and pushing, do you want to write a cuckold novel to play NTR?

Before it was put on the shelves, it looked like fairy grass. After it was put on the shelves, it became more and more similar until it turned into a piece of shit! The little gangster is just to show off his skills, not to really turn into a disgusting gangster. Moreover, he treats good girls in a disgusting manner and pushes them away as if they are sending her away.

Reply, the protagonist went to the underworld like a fool to pay usurious loans, thinking that everything would be fine after exchanging money. Do you think it is normal for the underworld to be so easy to talk to? Later, I heard from someone that after exchanging the loan, he was chased by the underworld for interest and even more. The idiot protagonist still had no consciousness at all, and then he wrote a lot of daily life. The underworld incident was stuck there like the previous time. It was hard to watch and could not accept such a retarded protagonist buried in daily stories.

I couldn't stand it after reading a few chapters. It feels like the author found some character templates on the Internet, such as a gangster eldest lady, a widowed stepmother, and a sister who is not related by blood. Even later, I can think of the high probability that there will be some green plums, female imps, or Yamato-type teachers. Then I made up some names and put them into the template, and then gave them to the AI ​​to run. Even the content, even I can guess the next development. It's not that I don't like love, but I can use templates to figure out the next step in everything from characters to content to plot development. I can't figure out how this kind of product was given to me. I probably couldn't get through the station next door, but he could still put it on the shelves.

I'm too lazy to scold you. Let's give the protagonist some more brains in the next book.

It's disgusting at the beginning. It's a clean slate setting. It's an annoyance when you get there. Damn it, I can talk about the template of an ordinary protagonist, but it's better than this one. The protagonist is an ordinary person in high school, college, or just out of society. He saves people and is hit by luck. He discovers a golden finger for debts, and then discovers that the gods are missing. He saves people himself and is a rich chaebol. Just choose that. Go in and find that you are conscious and don't need such stupid dialogue. Readers who often read these Tokyo novels should know how the protagonist generally operates according to my template. Either they use the guardian spirits and other extraordinary things to talk about what they have just done, or they just point out that they are human beings with special powers or other operations, and start the normal template to meet chaebols, mafia ladies, etc.

It gives the impression that the protagonist has no emotional intelligence, and I felt really uncomfortable watching the exchange with Ayase Yuki. There is obviously a problem, why don't you ask clearly? Communication with other girls is even more difficult to understand

Like... Every time the male protagonist encounters something, he:... There is no other description of his expression, it's all... I was totally tricked by the decisive fight at the beginning, and I thought the protagonist was a decisive person, too hesitant, and when he started a harem, there were still two bowls of water, and there was no intersection. Sasaki was the happiest and the most active in the interaction with the protagonist. Is it true that the weak attract each other?

Stop scolding, don't scold, this book still has many merits.

Look at the hammer and you will be in debt at the beginning. It made me fucking sick.

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