Zuo Daoxian

Have you ever cultivated to become an immortal? Just write randomly, take some things for granted, and some skills are unnecessary.

If you feel it will be hot, leave your name on the tongs! 🙂

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Okay, not bad

Tomorrow is Tuesday, and it depends on the recommendation of the reading group. I beg you readers to give me a follow-up reading!

I feel that the storyline is not very coherent, many plots are a bit inexplicable, and the various remarks and behaviors of the five charming stepmothers of the protagonist are also inconsistent with the characters.

Why start with the case? What role does it play in the main plot? Isn't this a fairy tale? Is it layout flow? Doesn't the profile tag say Cthulhu? Could it be that if the case is pushed forward, it will become a crime?

The introductions are all incomprehensible and mysterious.

The author is currently writing better and better later on, but now it seems that the early part is not bad, it seems that he deliberately gave people the feeling of fog of war. The reading feeling is in sync with the protagonist, but the overall foreshadowing also echoes.

The writing is very good. If you can write, write more and put it on the shelves soon.

I can only vote for recommendations. After all, I don't have a saved manuscript, and I don't know if I have written an outline.

How did the author manage to successfully invest in both novels?🙂