I Really Am Going to Keep You in Check!

Thankfully, this IP isn't Firefly. But it is indeed a newcomer, at least a newcomer on Qidian. I pray that it won't be abandoned.

I find Shiraishi Rin really annoying; the protagonist even likes to help her. Later, when she can't copy skills anymore, she still helps; it's a bit like she's sucking up.

This is my first attempt at writing a book, and I never expected to get a contract. I hope everyone will read and support me!

Any normal man would instinctively feel disgust towards a girl like Shiraishi Rin. So I can't help but ask the author, are you male or female?

The writing is terrible. Kazusa's progress is too fast and she's almost perfect, making the other heroines completely uncompetitive. In this situation, starting a harem just makes the male lead seem like he's betrayed Kazusa's trust, especially his tangled relationship with Shiraishi, which is disgusting.

To be honest, although I had read Dogfire's Life Swap Game before, which gave me a preconceived notion, the author's writing was indeed very good, and the character designs were also very delicate and vivid, which surprised me. However, I have to say that the character Shiraishi is really abstract.

I hope there won't be any yuri or similar storylines later on.

Ah, what a great work, yet no one seems to appreciate it.

As a reader who has read *The Life Swap Game*, my assessment of this book is that it's a substitute for *The Life Swap Game*. I'm also very grateful to the author for creating such an annoying character, I'm talking about you, Shiraishi. He's selfish, arrogant, and incredibly conceited. I didn't see any trace of his charm. If I were the protagonist, I would abandon him without any surprise.

I strongly suggest the protagonist be tied to Shiraishi; they're both amazing. The other girls are all pretty good, but these two are the real oddballs.