
I Really Am Going to Keep You in Check!
我真得狠狠控制你了!
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- Ongoing
- Length
- 641k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Subgenre
- Original Fantasy
- Updated
- 1mo ago
- Source
- Qidian
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Fortunately, this IP is not Yinghuo. But he is indeed a newcomer, at least a newcomer at the starting point. I made a wish not to be a eunuch.
I think Rin Shiraishi is really annoying, and the protagonist likes to help. I can't copy the skills later and I have to help, which is a bit embarrassing
Newbie, new book, please support by monthly ticket for reading ~
This is my first time trying to write a book, but I didn't expect to be able to sign a contract. Please support me by reading it
For girls like Shiraishi Rin, I believe any normal man would feel instinctive disgust. So I can't help but ask the author, are you a boy or a girl?
The writing was broken. Kazusa progressed too quickly and was relatively perfect. The other female protagonists were completely uncompetitive. In this case, starting a harem would only make people feel that the male protagonist had betrayed Kazusa's trust, especially with Shiraishi. It was disgusting.
After seeing the latest, Shiraishi suggested changing the name to Baiyanlang
To be honest, although I had preconceived ideas after watching Dog Yinghuo's Life Exchange Game, the author's writing is indeed very beautiful, and the character design is also very detailed and vivid, which surprised me. But I have to say that the B character of Shiraishi is really abstract. I understand that the author can understand the problems that exist in this character, and the male protagonist can also have a clear understanding of Shiraishi. But how to put it, a person with Shiraishi's character is a kind of person who is really possible in reality. It is really disgusting, double standards, ungrateful, unrestrained, disrespectful, and will only continue to hurt people who are good to her. Actually, I thought it was an old tsundere character at first, so I didn't pay much attention to it. But after reading the latest version and thinking about her plot, I was really a little angry. She is such a poet. The only strength that can save her, I don't know why the author gave her such a low strength. I can't even think about it. The talent level is not high enough and the rarity is average. I suggest that the author can completely strengthen her talent. Otherwise, she has no competitiveness at all from an emotional and utilitarian perspective. Really. Two monthly passes are presented.
I hope there won't be any plots like Lily in the later stage.
Ah, it's a pity that no one has good works.
As a reader who has read "The Life Exchange Game", my evaluation of this book is that "The Life Exchange Game" is a meal replacement I am also very grateful to the author for creating such an annoying character, and I am talking about you, Shiraishi. Selfish and arrogant, at least I don't see where Jiao is. If I were the protagonist, I would give up on him. It's not surprising at all. The protagonist is really kind-hearted. He has to help and save everything. There is a saying that respects the fate of others. It can be seen that the author wants to treat Shiraishi as an alternative female character. After all, exchanges may not always be smooth sailing, but for the protagonist, it should be as smooth sailing as possible. Do you really want to include him in the harem? Compared with some unlikable characters in "The Life Exchange Game", is Xu's alternative body? Like the female protagonist of Yinghuo, the female protagonist of this book is also well-characterized. If it were me, I would really start to play a single female protagonist. Isn't the female protagonist good? Many people also made suggestions for the previous book
It is strongly recommended that the protagonist and Shiraishi are tied up to death. The two gods are here. The other girls are pretty good, but these two gods are here.