Memory Pawn Shop, I Lived My Life for Others

It's a very new theme, turning memories into items that can be pawned, but I haven't seen what I will get after pawning it. After all, it's like buying and selling, he surrenders pain and gets happiness, so the buyer should also have positive results. Secondly, the third chapter uses a lot of descriptions to describe Su Wan's day. No, every day of hers is her life. It wants us to bring us into Su Wan's perspective. Although there is nothing wrong with it, it is a bit inadequate compared to the first two chapters. But in general, it is quite good. It has a similar beginning, and the emotional scenes are not too problematic. It is also narrated from a first-person perspective and has a sense of story. It embodies the unique urban flavor by nearly three thirds. Urban writing does not require good writing. It is not like cultivating immortals or martial arts, fighting monsters and upgrading. What it needs is a story, lyricism, and a feeling that can make readers empathize. That's all. Overall, I'll give you a 6 out of 10 points for the time being. Keep working hard.