Life Style Male God: Starting from Hex Every Week

How could there be a stereotypical urban novel plot where beautiful women are everywhere after rebirth? I'm afraid you are not reminiscing after death.

As the title says, this book is written... Why does it feel so girly?

The plot progresses too slowly. There are so many women who appear in the main plot. It's unclear which woman is doing what in the back.

If you continue to describe women like this, such meaningless descriptions. Then your book is basically useless.

It's hard to do it without income for a year.

1. There are too many female characters, and each character is too thin. It can be enough to rewrite 2-3 female characters. 2. The way to make money is actually through power training, that is, Goldfinger directly sends money. It's better than this 3. What does Europe and America mean?

There are too many women. I just read chapter 4 and there are four women. I can't stand it anymore.

A waste is reborn. How can he change? It is impossible to rely solely on oneself.

I borrowed Guibao to promote a book, "Happiness God", also known as "I feel happy and I can make money continuously". You can get a reward of 5,000 for making a short video and laughing, 8,000 for winning a game, and 10,000 for admiring a beautiful woman... On the left, he hugs his cute and cute little apprentice, and on his right, he hugs a female Chinese medicine doctor who is cold on the outside and hot on the inside. From then on, Li Qi's wonderful life has quietly arrived! [Sorry for disturbing you, please contact me to delete]

Is this Luoxue also a reborn person? I also said before that I was very close to him before I went to get out of shape, but after that, I started to drift away. He said that she looked at her face, and then gave her encouragement later. The protagonist said that it felt good to be cared about by others. This protagonist has parents and is not an orphan.

There are too many women writing about them, so you have to focus on the key points! There are only a few dozen chapters and you can just rewrite one or two, but no one can stand out from writing so many chapters!

Based on my experience of reading novels for many years, I probably think there are some problems 1. Problems of the times. The common problem of most rebirth novels is that people who are reborn do not know how to make money. In an era when information is so abundant, you will not understand how to make money when you are thirty or forty years old. As long as you have short videos, as long as you have search records that want to make money, big data will give you crazy recommendations. What is wrong with ordinary people? 2. I have seen in many street novels that the protagonists who are reborn do not have the sense of maturity of rebirth, including this one. Is it possible that your rebirth has also reborn your experience? Of course, I can understand that the author may be young and not have this kind of experience, but it is more likely that you can't write that kind of feeling. Unless you invest in light novels, people will rush to read Xiao Chunan's love story and they will tolerate you 3. There are too many characters. You may have interacted with only one or two before you were reborn. How come after you are reborn, various types of beautiful girls start to circle around you? The first time I saw this, it looked much better and I am already tired of aesthetics. Suggestion: If you don't change the world, you should outline the protagonist's career line. It is based on majors and work to make money around major events in various eras. Not much else to say, at least a few small goals, wealth and freedom are not a problem. If you are not ambitious, just focus on daily life, or write about traveling through parallel worlds, so you don't have to worry about making money. Don't worry about experience, and then switch to light novels. If there are many characters, it doesn't matter if you just treat it as a romance novel. Of course, people can accept it if you want to write a mindless and enjoyable novel, but the author must also accept that if the data is not good, he will not make money, and there is a risk of cutting the book.

If there is one Hex a week, won't it collapse in minutes in the later stage?

There is only one female supporting character in the chapter. You can also use a succubus system. I feel like everyone wants to cheat.

A new female character is introduced every 2 chapters. After reading more than 10 chapters, I just ran around and dealt with 6 or 7 women. The plot advances too slowly, and what is the main plot?

I guess I started by buying it. In what age are you still writing about making money? It smells like a loser. However, although there are only a few female supporting characters at the beginning, the writing is okay, and at first glance, it seems that they were written by a virgin.

The most annoying thing is the plug-ins that reward real things.

Chapters 177 and 178 are repeated

Have you actually exercised? Scribbling here? Take it for granted

Why don't you read it again when you are born again? Do you really go directly to a vocational college?