Hogwarts: Jade, Stop Controlling Harry!

Although there are too few updates at present, it is really good-looking. It is rare to see a green and healthy fanfic that is completely free of popular memes and bad jokes. The writing style is very similar to traditional children's literature, easy to read, and the characters are also very original. You can even make up the sounds in your head while reading. In short, it is good-looking!

Mystery 1 ,

Harry Potter: Your Name🙂

How could Dumbledore catch Xiaoyu before the plane took off? Can Old Bee complete this task?

You guy, I issued the rape and murder order in vain, and finally opened a new book, but why is it like this?

Look at the West from A's perspective. Harry's uncle's family is a complete mess.

I came here looking for fun, and got on the wrong sedan chair and found a good book, haha

Harry's plot seems too pretentious. Xiaoyu's plot seemed quite interesting when I wrote it, but why did I come to Harry and write so much space that I couldn't see any interesting points?

Let's change people. What was written in the front is good, but what the hell is there suddenly a female rivalry between Hermione and Zhang Qiu in the back?

The previous plot was okay, Xiaoyu's plot there was very good, but when it came to Harry's plot with the Lord, it felt a bit monotonous. Comparatively speaking, Xiaoyu will be more interesting in Hogwarts, and if you add some inheritance and spell power here, you will have more expectations. In addition, the writing style is a bit flat. The visual representations of battle conflicts do not describe Xiaoyu's feeling of communicating with people in a different world. They are dull and have no role in promoting the plot. There are many fans of Harry, but Xiaoyu's character and resources are more suitable for focusing on the world of Hogwarts.

The subject matter is very good, Harry's growth line is relatively long, and Xiaoyu's is relatively short, so the pacing and plot arrangement in the later period are up to the author. There is a small point. It is a bit vulgar to have multiple girls in a double penetration situation. If the two themes are well written, the score of this book will not be bad. The author should not touch the multi-girl situation and write those small-headed plots. The chapters of Qiu Chang and Hermione are incompatible. Both themes are childhood-oriented. Doing those is like sprinkling chili powder on a cream cake, which is very conflicting.

I have almost read the 200th chapter, and I feel that the novel as a whole can be strengthened. However, the plot of Hermione and Zhang Qiu's evil thoughts in chapter 191 feels a bit toxic, so I will wait and see for the rest.

Xiaoyu's plot is very well written, but the plot on Harry's side cannot be divided into two parts.

Does the author still remember the British magician in Jackie Chan's Adventures? It's those "secret magicians" in episode 45. I can write something more later

If Harry gets the Rat Charm, can he resurrect his mother's statue? Thinking about the expression on Snape's face then makes him laugh.

I hope there won't be any emotional scenes. Whether it's Harry Potter or Jackie Chan's Adventures, they are all about adventure. Besides, emotional scenes require writing skills and can easily overturn.

It turns out to be Xiaoyu, I thought it was Yuxiao●

There isn't much of a problem with Xiaoyu's plot in the magical world. But Harry's psychological description and hesitation felt a bit too much. Maybe he could be more brave or decisive? Harry's psychology and reasons for doing things make me think he is more like Harry:) As for Dad, I feel that his personality is a bit biased towards Dumbledore, and he often looks and sees through people's hearts. In my personal image, Dad in front of the dog charm is more weird and nagging. As for the part about recruiting disciples, I personally feel that it is better to go slower and let Harry show his abilities and heart. After all, it has only been three or four days?

Or can the rat charm be used on the petrified life forms caused by the basilisk and HP's posthumous oil paintings 😰

If Xiaoyu gets the Tiger Talisman, it can only balance the magic power, or it can be used as a clone. Then there will be two Harrys, or one Harry and one Harley. 😏

I have read Harry Potter fan fiction for so many years, and this novel is still very good. I hope to publish more and support a wave of authors 🙂

Use Chinese educational ideas to reshape the educational environment of Harry Potter. Very innovative and looking forward to further development.

The pace is so slow! Haven't you finished writing 700,000 words in the first year? Does the author want to write 4 million words?

Why does Harry appear among the two protagonists?

Very good book. The poisonous point of most Jackie Chan Adventures fans is the forced imposition of immortality and a new system. The poisonous point of most Harry Potter fans is the over-exaggeration of the hostile forces. But in fact, the magical adventures and character portrayals that everyone likes to watch are not magical confrontations. This book is indeed telling a story, using the story to slowly make the characters grow and mature, which is better than most fans. The writing is very concise and smooth, without adding too many new settings, making it very comfortable to read. To put it bluntly, if this book is a fanfic enlightenment work for readers, then it may be difficult for readers to read fanfics with random settings.

Why are there so few updates? It has changed from three to two. What's going on? Instead of adding more, it's subtracting. What's going on? Answer me look in my eyes!

Did Xiaoyu get the rabbit charm and use her speed to travel through time and space and enter Harry's world?

🍅There is also a book about whether to fry or eat both ends 😰

It's pretty good, I hope there will be more updates

I wiped it, I finished reading it in one breath, why did it end here... Damn it