Imperial Military Mirror: Shinshu Kiraoshi

If I want to write about Ashikaga, there are the Shogun family, Kanto Kōfō, Hirashima Kōkō, Kahosokawa, Mikawa Kira, Mutsu Ishibashi, Kyushu Shibukawa, Bizen Ueno; If I want to write about Concentration, there are Suwa, Sanada, Kiso, Ogasawara Sanke, and Takanashi.

The current total stone height of Shinano Country should be around 400,000 stones🤔🤔

I really can't find where to upload the pictures, so I'll put them here from now on👀

I stayed up late in the past two days to read this book, and only read six or seven chapters. Let me briefly mention a few points, which the author selected and adopted: First, the plot design at the beginning is very strange. Usually, the beginning is either an event that pushes people away, such as being knocked on the door, or it is about the daily life of the protagonist, so that everyone can slowly understand the protagonist and integrate into this world view. It starts with conversations, meetings, and abdication. In the context of an imaginary family, it is difficult for readers to enter the background and emotions you want to lay out. Especially when you give information through dialogue, it's very tiring to watch. Create a father and then immediately abdicate. I don't know what the father did or what the protagonist did. The protagonist takes the position without any performance in front of the readers, which is somewhat surprising. After the meeting, the battle was about to start. The enemy was not introduced or described enough, and the beginning was too hasty. The beginning of the story is neither a story of excitement and suspense, but a situation where the plot and emotional rhythm are not very coordinated. Second, the author's language style can be adjusted. The current writing style cannot be said to be beautiful, the writing style is half-baked, and the psychological descriptions and scenery descriptions are also relatively average. I suspect it was written by AI. Some lyrical passages and character dialogues are too written, not colloquial, and not fluent. Third, in serious analysis, there is too little serious content such as negotiation. Often, one person can explain the character's motivations in a dialogue and express his emotions in one or two sentences, and the character cannot stand up at all. The lyrical content is too overwhelming and awkward, and I feel seriously separated from the samurai who has been in troubled times for many years. Fourth, there is too little background introduction before the battle begins. The city, geographical environment, and mobilization situation are not explained much. It's best to put more topographical maps in the text, otherwise readers can only imagine, my God, this is still an imaginary family. The Sanada family next door, among other things, was given a clear map of the terrain of the early Shinano battle. Fifth, everyone's speaking style is highly similar and there is no difference.

Shinshu Kira Family Governor

It's a historical novel with so many fictional characters that I don't even want to read it.

Daughter of the businessman Hashimoto family

The approximate location should be good🤔🤔

Daughter of a concubine of the Sanada family

Is the protagonist dead? I haven't seen it in dozens of chapters.

Isn't the author considering putting it on the shelf? The writing is very good, but if you don't put it on the shelf, I'm worried that I won't update if I chase you.

The author is so filthy and inhuman

As long as Takeda falls, the Kamisami family will have all strategic advantages. Whether it is entering and exiting Kanto or going up Luo along the Hokuriku Road, it will be very convenient. On the contrary, if Takeda completely surrenders to Shinano, the Kamisami family will be like rats in the bellows and cannot go anywhere. For the Kamisami family, the best solution is to give up Echichu and promise to help Echichu's allies to restore the country in the future. If Shinano's allies are gone, what will happen if they get all Echichu?

The daughter of a member of the Konoe family

Thank you for your support during this period~ Let me synchronize it here: the entire manuscript has been written to 500,000 words, and the first volume "The Lone Wolf of Shinano" is expected to be completed at about 750,000 words. I value the texture of the story and the logic of the deduction more, so I will maintain the current pace and move forward steadily according to the original outline. No matter what the data is, I will definitely present this game of Shinshu Kira to everyone👍

I have only read five chapters, and this is the richest opening of a Warring States novel I have seen so far. The family is united without retainers to control the authority, and the control over subordinates is strong. The prestige of the governor of the hometown is strong, and the young and old take over normally. Even if the prestige of the small one is not enough, there are still old ones who can come out to take care of the situation. There is no shortage of supplies such as food, grass, armor, etc. From the beginning, he is far ahead of others, and he is already capable of unifying the world. , And received an education method that was ahead of the times, and the thinking and ideas will always be better than those of the same generation. Even if it is not a genius, it is not too bad. This is simply, I almost thought it was the scale of the early and middle periods, but the result is just the beginning. How can I say, comparing this opening to novels of the same type, it is like comparing Nobunaga who unified Owari and Hideyoshi who just became an official of the Imagawa family. The difference is not a little bit different.

The writing is really good, and it has the same quaint flavor as when I first read history books a few years ago. However, in some places I feel that the writing is a little too literary, but overall the flaws are outweighed.

I would like to ask the author if he plans to finish this book?